Okay, when I read that I was not expecting, he was courting death at the end that was funny. Thank you.

I said I would make another review. After you hit 5 chapters you have and I gotta say I've enjoyed every single one I enjoy the character interaction. It's not too fast. It's not too slow. It is a very enjoyable, thank you.

If for some reason you need to power up your character, you can figure out a way to get 2 twice criticals. It was the name of the sacred gear that they thought the main character had at the beginning of the show. It could be useful if we had 2 of those. It doubles everything about the user once.

I got a question earlier in the chapter. When Jasper appeared, did he take his sacred gear? Or did he make a copy of it with his own eyes?

You know I wasn't expecting this to update so soon. But I was hooked on this chapter and when it ended. At that cliff hanger jesus, why would you do this to me? I can't wait for the next update man continue doing an amazing job. I hope you have a good day.

I didn't know that but I will wait. And read any chapter you put out. Don't work too hard and push yourself to a burnout.

I'm leaving it at this for now. I like the first chapter but I will wait and see till about chapter 5. Then I'll change my rating.

I like it so far but I'll wait till there's at least 10 chapters before I change my review. It's looking promising, so keep up the good work.

When Peter absorbs something into his glove. Doesn't it need have a soul to use those powers? Because he could absorb the seed, but would he still be able to use the powers of it?

That sounds amazing, but what type of powers what that given besides like light manipulation and energy manipulation?

This is perfection.

Listen I really enjoyed the old story. I did it had its problems but I enjoyed it. I'm giving you 5 stars in everything and I'm hoping that this story is either better or just improvement over the old one.

Thank you

When did the first holy Grail war start?

It's an interesting idea I'll wait till another 5 chapters before. I post an actual review but I like what you have so far can't. wait to see what you do with it.

Poor Malcador his brain got broken and then fixed then broken again

You're doing great keep up the good work.

Yes he's back baby 😃

This was a fantastic chapter thank you

if Gil fights 682 and he uses anti-divity anti-mortal anti-regeneration based weapons 682 is going to become super powerful