best chapter ending

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

yep just try reading it man cause you could see that the author put many beautiful character who meet the mc into the novel if thats what you are saying trying to find

maybe not because the story show the mc fixate on 1 girl although they also have 4 beautiful maid thats have is too loyal to the mc and will do ANYTHING if he ever order it

i m not good at writing review so just my honest take on the novel so far. -pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow -i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one -i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely -thats all, for me this novel is good

i m not good at writing review so just my honest take on the novel so far. -pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow -i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one -i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely -thats all, for me this novel is good[img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

man that short crinis part really hit the spot, can't wait for more chapters

this novel does have some grammar error but it doesn affect the reading that much. for the story is it quite interesting its just that the story building is not perfect (considering its still in early stage so no worries on this one). other than that i think this story is good and only time will show whether its gold or dirt

DEATH SHALL WE OBTAIN GLORY, FOR THE COLONY!!!!

man this novel is so underated it has good flow in the story

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man i don know if its posible but make anthony humonoid after a few more evo or combining races