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Mepo2yrCommentedDragging it as she walked, the little girl came over to Lin Fan and said, "Welcome home dear, would you like to have some food first or would you like a bath? Or would you like something else…"- Mepo2yrReplied to FourSeven_
He's only a tad food crazy I swear ;3
A server glides over to us handing desserts to Marshal and I. Marshal has a layered tower of cake and jam. If I'm not mistaken it's lemon from the aroma. My eyes land on my dessert. A cute little cake it is. Covered with smooth white frosting, and bordered with little swirls. And it's crowned with candied strawberries. My heart almost skips a beat as I marvel at the cake's simple beauty. 'And I haven't even taken a bite.' - Mepo2yrReplied to FourSeven_The stew is divine. Heavenly. The broth is as thick and creamy as it looked—yet light and smooth. The vegetables are perfectly seasoned and practically melt in my mouth. I also love the taste of the broth. It's so savory—cheesy, but not too cheesy. It blends so well with the vegetables.
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Ooo, that's good.
"You should never go easy on any woman," I say aloud, mirroring my mom's words. "My mom told me that," I tell her. - Mepo2yrCommented
Hello! As you know I've started to premium my chapters. While I wanted to wait a little while longer like some longer stories I thought it best to start here based on how the story is going to shape. I can't say much more than that, but I do hope you'll stick around if you've enjoyed "MarKed" so far. A new arc is on the horizon, and quite possibly a new danger ;)
Ch 26 Chapter 25 [] - Mepo2yrReplied to sxliih
About to update it. It should read a little better now.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Mepo2yrReplied to stoneclauss
Hmm, well I don't know exactly how far you've read, but for your first point, I've written chapters that go more into depth into some of the terms and places you mentioned. Though the reason I usually don't explain things up front most of the time is because I'd like the narration to remain purely from Benji's point of view meaning he wouldn’t think too hard about something that is common knowledge unless prompted. So in places like the prologue or casual conversation, I don’t see where I can insert this exposition, but I do use some of the examples you’ve listed in later chapters. As for affinities, I can't exactly spell out which are and aren’t rare which is why I use Benji's reactions to each one to hint at which are common. That’s why no other time a common affinity is used does Benji react. Now for the blushing, I think you're referring to the Well Rest chapter, and as far as I can tell all the blushing there is from embarrassment. Now the lap pillow. Yes as far as what I've shown at the point in the story you're referring too they've known each other for 2 days. Benji had just finished a fight and is still recovering from healing, and stressing about his friend that's why Kate gave him the lap pillow. To Kate, something like this isn't that big a deal. Like how some people will hug strangers even though something like that can be seen as too familiar to others. Now the stroking hair thing well I can't really explain it entirely because it goes into some backstory, but it's sort of similar to doing something that'd calm you down to someone else to calm them down. I will mention though some situations are warped slightly from being from Benji's point of view. I do appreciate this review, however, there are some problems you mentioned that I thought might crop up. Such as it taking a bit longer than I’d like to explain the fundamentals. Your pointers and criticisms are appreciated, and I thank you for the honest review
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POV you're Benji's mirror around the Merry times
"Thanks for Reading!" - Mepo2yrReplied to MediocreSkaterCh 4 Chapter 3–Duels
- Mepo2yrReplied to ZimmerIt's always interesting to watch Charley fight, one, because of his short stature—he's 4'11—and, two, because he's a support type elf. This of course means he can mark any living thing besides himself—in this case, Seliro.
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This one I remember, and I did translate "sugar" to get to "Saccharo".
"Wonderful. What are your names—I'm Ms. Saccharo," Ms. Saccharo says with a big smile. - Mepo2yrReplied to Zimmer
Lol, not for this one in particular. This is a mash-up of some Japanese words (using roman characters of course).
"Alright! I will be your instructor. My name is Ron Verindaisuki. You can call me Ron. As you know this class is to keep yous from getting soft on us. Every now and then I may put together a group spar session or make you do some drills I will craft especially for you. But for the most part, you may do as you please as long as you're working hard. The drills your parents drilled into your skulls should be good for today, but if you need something harder I'll give you something hellish. Now, you may begin. I'm here to support you so don't be shy if you have any questions," Mr. Ron says, crossing his arms and beginning to do squats with a far too stern expression. - Mepo2yrReplied to Zimmer
;)
"You're here to eat aren't ya. Eat your fill, son." - Mepo2yrReplied to Zimmer
Nah, you have to arrange your own covers. Though there are defaults, I was rocking one for a while actually.
It's beautiful. The craftsmanship is clear just by looking. It's black, but its edge glinted red. It's like a shadow surrounded by a ring of flame. It's in sharp contrast to my main blade. It's silvery-white with an edge that glints a light teal. I grin as I turn over the small paper inside the box. - Mepo2yrReplied to Zimmer
I got someone to make it for me (credits in synopsis). It actually inspired some things that weren't originally in Marked so in a way, Lapiz helped me write some parts ;p
It's beautiful. The craftsmanship is clear just by looking. It's black, but its edge glinted red. It's like a shadow surrounded by a ring of flame. It's in sharp contrast to my main blade. It's silvery-white with an edge that glints a light teal. I grin as I turn over the small paper inside the box. - Mepo2yrReplied to Zimmer
Haha, glad to see you caught that ;]
That was the setting of the dream. I was in a cave talking to someone that I don't recognize. And while I can no longer reconstruct the dream, whatever we discussed shook me to my very core—as if someone walked over my grave.