Garchomp/Kommo-o are my favorite dragon types

In the Bible in some verse it says it’s better to plant your seed in the belly of a wh@*& then leave your seed on the ground or something like Ike that

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Both black, and white are colors because we can see them transparent and clear are not colors because we see through them like windows yet we persieve them unlike if something is truly invisible then how do we know it real, so white and black are colors because white reflects light and black absorbs it thus are eyes perceive it.

If kuina ate a devil fruit the one that would probably suit her best is a mythical zoan fruit being a Yuki Onna.

Unfortunately this happens in war and speaking subjectively and strategically this might be someone else. Who will gain more from this both sides weak fighting each other who will come in who benefits most in war the rich the elites thoughts in power.Absolute power will corrupt absolutely and the innocent suffers on both sides, and both sides are blinded by anger and anger makes people stupid sorry if it sounds callous but war is always ugly in the end we are all people no matter are Race, Religion, and way of life. Good and bad people are a dime a dozen.

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ITS PIKACHU

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Not bad so far, its a good read just wish it had more.

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Markus the guy with the power of thousands of Stars/Suns inside v. Alex with power of SUN GOD NIKA/other divinites. The vibe I get from this is same as Ghost Rider the movie with Nicolas Cage with the end fight with legion and Ghost Rider.

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How about call the group CERBERUS.

It is a song by Kansas look it up it's pretty good if you have not heard it before plus it is a bit of an older song that was made in the 70's.

Carry on, my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more Once I rose above the noise and confusion Just to get a glimpse beyond this illusion I was soaring ever higher But I flew too high Though my eyes could see, I still was a blind man Though my mind could think, I still was a mad man I hear the voices when I'm dreaming I can hear them say Carry on, my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more Masquerading as a man with a reason My charade is the event of the season And if I claim to be a wise man, well It surely means that I don't know On a stormy sea of moving emotion Tossed about, I'm like a ship on the ocean I set a course for winds of fortune But I hear the voices say Carry on my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more, no Carry on, you will always remember Carry on, nothing equals the splendor Now your life's no longer empty Surely heaven waits for you Carry on, my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry, don't you cry no more No more

Is he in the world of monster integration

This is actually a good story with a neat concept. I also like that it is incorporating the ideas from not only Greek mythology, and the Percy Jackson series with a twist.Not gonna lie it is suprisingly good story with the amount of chapters it has now. The hope I have for this story is that Zues get what he deserves.

The writing quality is pretty good, and ledgable, but the plot leaves is all over the place. The speed of updates to the novel has a good pase.Why I think this is not good. First going to 3 diffrent places (DxD, some magic world with a dungeon, digital world) within the span of 20 something chapters makes the plot too confusing. Second the characters back story is just so confusing he wants revenge but the MC feels like he is lacking a personality with no character growth the character dose not feel genuine at all. Third this story is mainly driven by so many cliches; SPOILER: Issie mom becomes pregnant, 'THE WHITE KNIGHT' theme character, all girls are attracted to him, Batman esc. back story... It not bad to write with these cliches there is just no spacing in between plots ther needs to be more detial, and needs to be fleshed out more. Four if you are not writing a character that is not going to have a harem don't start him off in a world that is basically softcore p*** with fan service characters. Five everything seems too forced, and the MC feel fake and bland. To the author your writing is good and you do have talent, but what do I know I've never written a story anyways I digress you should keep your character in one world to start off with and have him interact with the main characters of said plot, and whenever there is down time in between the first world plot you should go to another or just finish off the entire world events before moving to the next world. These are just my thoughts, and you can take them with a grain of salt, but in my opinion you should rewrite right before you went to that dungeon world, and stay in DxD.