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he is a kid, growing into his power. I made a graph of his strength progression, right now... at the age of fifteen, his strength is around 5 tonnes. By the time he is 30, he will have Ikaris's full strength of around 100 tonnes.
This will be explained in later chapters. His background story is pretty epic, if I do say so myself.
good point. a correction has to be made.
you should introduce alchemy. Say Adam has always been experimenting with a way to enhance blood and he figured it out. So, now they can make a variety of blood that tastes similar to humans. later on, you can make them find a unique mixture that mixes with his blood to create Nobles.
In these recent chapters, the author has forgotten about Edward's day one friend, Jacob. Edward is always hanging out with the girls, giving this a twisted harem vibes. he should be hanging with Jacob and other guys. that's how the world works. No dude hangs out with girls all the time since, even if they are friends, something more will happen.
Not a very important part of the story. But... hmmm. Jessica is a bit shallow so it works with her. As for Angela, she is a part of the story but she won't be around forever. Remember, this story is more than just Twilight.