los bastardos son el comienso de asoiaf, y deben ser el final...

como abra sido el baile, de esas criaturas, si tenian dragones inteligentes... algo debio de cambiar.

pense que habias dicho en la sipnopsis que no querias plantear un oc malvado, y aunque a claraste el hecho que no querias que tai lung fuera un seguidor tonto de Po, el camino que nos muestras ahora es plenamente malvado, guerra de unificacion, siempre trae muerte en cantidades abrumadoras, rosando los genocidios, que esto de por si trae caos, y caos en esa epoca significaba inestabilidad social, lo que planteaba el problema del alimento, por ende se presentaban habrunas, y china antigua era completamente cerrada y era centrada a la agricultura, y si esto cae tambien lo hace la economia, y todo seria un ciclo porque esto traeria bandolerrismo y mas muerte. todo por la decicion de tu oc, el que "no" hibas a hacer malvado, sino "neutral". espero que puedas comprender mis dudas, no es critica solo es opinion. the text is in spanish, traslate.

ojos azules, faltaron los ojos azules.

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Actualiza la serie. Saca más episodios. Hasta donde lo llevas vas progresando razonablemente bien. No lo dejes caer, no lo abandones. Éxitos...💯💯💥 Traslate.

disculpa esa circunstancia, es que realmete no hablo ni escribo el ingles. cada ves que escribia me tocaba ir a un traductor, y no me gustaba, esa cuestion casi hace que abandonara la intencion de escribir. disculpa los problemas causados, y espero que sigas apoyandome.

hola, gracias por tu comentario. Te das cuenta que para eso falta mucho verdad? todavia ni yo, estoy decidido por quien sera el interes amoroso. puede que sea un oc, otra diosa, o una semidiosa de la antiguada, es más, ni siquiera a rencarnado si lees la sipnopsis te daras cuenta que realmete la historia ni ha empezado.

The comment is in spanish. Si, me encanta tu obra, estas esforzándote en los detalles más sutiles, si bien cometes algunos errores no son imperdonables. Pero no veo el camino de harén que le estas haciendo a rolf. Con luna como esposa y de pronto 1 o 2 mujeres más, te facilitaría manejar la trama, pues vaciarla los capítulos en relaciones vacías. Pero metes a: Hermione Fay Luna Daphne ...(así dañas una trama, ten en cuenta que 2 de esas 4 están casadas en la novela original de jk.) Mi opinión no lo tomes como crítica, te digo enserio me encanta tu fanfic.

Que consideras que es un harem???

Ya no, ya está funcionando la página web normalmente. Gracias a Dios...

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first of all, how have you been, first I'm going to tell you that I've reread the whole story from scratch, and I see some aspects that I didn't notice when I read it for the first time, I consider that childhood and first trip, well, that's it I find everything fine, but, and from then on, I mean, the second trip, that is, the first time he goes to Great Britain, there are many unfinished points, that is, quite a few loose points, which you mentioned before the first meeting with Orlando leaves him loose, like at one point you say you're going to deal with that topic and from one chapter to another you leave it, like the question of Vali (I don't want to say that this is very important). You ask what you think you need and I will try to answer. Regarding your question about the council, the truth is that following what you said is a council of old families, even if he wanted to join (which I don't think is convenient, nor does it produce any good to fenrir), they would not immediately let him because she doesn't have an old family path, unless she has cliopna, which I think is nothing, she couldn't join. The question of the magic core is a key point because it allows explanations of many things. Although I haven't seen True Blood and I haven't finished Teen Wolf, I think everything is going well as far as The Vampire Diaries, the original, Harry Potter, everything is going well; For the world of Pangea, you should advance the creation of the portals a little, at least for Europeans, because if you wait until approximately 1600 for the secret status, the potential that Pangea has would be wasted. All this is my humble opinion...😁😁😄🧐

ahhh, well, well friend, it's just that a year and almost four months, on hiatus, is a lot, and I wanted to see if it was worth continuing to wait... AS I TOLD YOU "IF YOU NEED HELP, IDEAS OR SIMPLE EDITING AND VERIFICATION" It may not be the most professional, but how much with my help!

Hello how are you doing... I'm here for an explanation of why you dropped such a glorious story, you had everything, and the mega crossover you invented in this story is WOW... Day 4 waiting for you to answer me... thank you.

Hello how are you doing... I'm here for an explanation of why you dropped such a glorious story, you had everything, and the mega crossover you invented in this story is WOW... Day 3 waiting for you to answer me... thank you.

Hello how are you doing... I'm here for an explanation of why you dropped such a glorious story, you had everything, and the mega crossover you invented in this story is WOW... Day 2 waiting for you to answer me... thank you.

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Hello how are you doing... I'm here for an explanation of why you dropped such a glorious story, you had everything, and the mega crossover you invented in this story is WOW... day 1 waiting for you to answer me... thank you.

friend, it has not occurred to you to make a fanfiction of the same "the witcher"; it is an open world based on books adapted to a game and today even netflix released a series then there is where to get information, and having not only a center of power within the world you can choose many other options not only be reborn as a witcher but there is also the option of witcher, noble, etc.. and different races, and the greatest opportunity for adaptability is the conjunction of the spheres that you want or not, it is explained that it is the coalition of different worlds in one, then look at you that appears another frank within this "the witcher". ????????