...I just noticed I got nothing on my page other than fate. Anyone got any franchise to suggest? Only ones I refuse to do are DBZ, Pokémon and One Piece.
The grammar is good, so this is easy to read. Some of the character changes come off a little forced or cringy but not a huge issue. I think my only real complaint is the OC's overwhelming need to be morally right. Basically he's poor magic Batman.