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Yes, we already started with the plot inconsistencies. Not only the time to manufacture them, how he obtained the plans, since I doubt he invented them, and also the impact that this type of technology would have today, the history of DxD takes place in 2008, how does virtual technology Hasn't it had an impact on the industry? It's simply absurd.
Of course, that's why they threw out Xenovia even though she could use Durandal. Let's be honest whether in fiction or real life the church has done many questionable and senseless things.
The girls have their puppy dog eyes and the men have their head pats, all perfectly balanced XD.
He's actually right, what Sirzech did is very logical and a good move. But if I have learned anything it is that putting your work before your family always ends badly, anyone who has seen Adam Sandler's movie Click will understand what I mean.
Sirzech is a joke as a leader, the guy is stupidly strong to the point that gods like Hades are afraid of him. But the idiot allows himself to be bossed around by beings who are weaker than him, he is pathetic.
Obviously yes. The dispute is between the angels, fallen and demons. He is a human and he does not belong to any faction so he can do whatever he wants.
No, they don't know him. Even though they are demons of the Christian pantheon and are natural enemies of the biblical god, they have never heard of him 😒. Seriously, what's up with this Kokabiel? Every time he speaks he says nonsense.
This guy really did brain damage. Serafall has enough power to destroy a country multiple times and Sirzech literally has the power to destroy the world. Do you really think that Rias and Sona have that kind of power?
Yes, this is an error by the author. Pyromancy is the magical ability to create and manipulate fire at will. Pyrokinesis is the mental ability to create and manipulate fire through the psychic energy produced by the mind.
It's stupid to keep blocking. Oasis has too many advantages and anyone moderately intelligent knows that Oasis will become a metaverse that has a lot to offer.
Author, if this type of thing seems strange and stupid to you, why don't you fix it and make it more logical? I'm saying this so you won't be surprised if I ask you later why your non-MC lost to the power of Issei's breasts as would be the "logical" thing to do.
I would say that this is absurd since the power of the holy grail is focused on souls, but considering that in the novel, the vampires were transformed into dragons, I'll let it slide, after all the original novel itself is full of inconsistencies.
I agree, Author the story is going well, don't start writing nonsense, in the church there are many radicals and hypocrites who would undoubtedly treat Valerie as a heretic and rip off her sacred gear, for example, David Cerro (from Slash Dog) has the mentality that sacred gears should only belong to the church and that no one else has the right to use them, just with that, one has to think about how the church could be with this kind of people.
I have an idea, since Cao Cao is in London, why not recruit Meredith Ordinton, she is not only a top level magician, but she has the Alphecca Tyrant that can control humans, that is extremely useful, she could control to anyone, politicians and millionaires from various countries to obtain funds and a stable base, control exorcists and magicians from various organizations to have them as spies. I could even rescue Valerie with that, control several vampire hunters and exorcists and send them to attack the Tepes family while Cao Cao and the others take the opportunity to get her out, everyone will think it was the church and no one will know the truth, the more I think about it This sacred gear seems more dangerous to me.
I also suggest that cao cao learn magic from Sun wukong, use his hair to create clones, transformation/shapeshifting (72 forms used by Sun wukong), manipulation of the 5 Chinese elements (Fire, water, wood, metal, earth), spirit control (Optional Sun Wukong has it but rarely uses it). I mention these skills, since they are not something that Sun Wukong was born with, but rather it is Taoist magic that he learned from a sorcerer monk at the beginning of his history, a human monk, it would be illogical if he did not teach these magic to the MC when he himself learned them from a human. While we're at it, I should also teach him how to deal with other Sacred Gears with his magic, in the novel he was very capable of stopping True Longinus with one finger and Dimension Lost effortlessly.
I have some ideas on how to improve the MC. First, since he is staying with the Chinese pantheon, why not make him meet and get along with some Chinese god or goddess, and he gives him gifts such as peaches of immortality and divine wine (they are what Sun Wukong gets). ate in his myth) would not only increase his lifespan by thousands of years, but would give him the ability to fly, great invulnerability, and physical strength by several hundred tons. You could also have Mc develop Renewal Taekwondo from The God of the High school, he is a Spear user and has free legs, which would make a perfect match, especially since Renewal Taekwondo is a martial art that is used for fighting. against Gods and all kinds of supernatural beings.
No, it's better not to put Fate in this fic, Fate is a world with very complex and harsh laws, the force in that world is measured only by brute force if not mostly by mystery and concepts that are much more problematic to deal with, besides the planets in that world are not rocks floating in space, they are living beings with a mind and will of their own, and let's not mention the Root, that thing is something that exists on a multiversal level, it's not something Alex can mess with .
lady death or Hela?
I vote for Latía, she has potential, and we don't fall for using repetitive characters.