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Jaden_Wagner1hCommentedAnd thats a wrap for me, 1-4 never before happened incidents. sure makes senss. time after time after time of never seen before accidents only happens to MCs BS writing peace out.
"A divine beast has never left the Primordial Expanse through a Floodgate before…"- Jaden_Wagner2hCommented
How did she get the same evaluation as the MC then if this is all her talent does seems like you are nerfing the MC his whole stick is the fact he is using soul orbs which makes him well rounded now heres is someone who is the same as him out of nowhere seems sus
"My talent is called 'Golden Presence'. You already know it's A- rank. It's a sort of limited time power up, Increasing all my physical attributes by 50% for 10 minutes. After that exhaustion takes over and my strength would decrease drastically until I can refill my energy reserves." - Jaden_Wagner4hCommented
I always found it annoying that as soon as the MC comes all of the sudden apocalyptic events start happening like normal life in the expanse isn’t dangerous enough to kill him if he didnt have his protag halos we gotta make it even more unbelievable.
The city barrier may have been designed to hold up against the attacks of a B+ ranked beast, but against the combined effort of 1 B- rank mantis and dozens of C+ ranked beasts and the tens of thousands of other lower ranked beasts, it only lasted 5 minutes. - Jaden_Wagner5hCommented
Would nope right outta there
'Something smells fishy about this, but what is it?' - Jaden_Wagner3dReplied to fantasy_prime
Ok so he cant work under anyone so that means he can create his own tho and people can join him ? I dont really get why being a Big shot means he cant accept help from others that’s severely limiting him i mean if you can do amazing things on your own imagine what you can do with others. Never did get the cliche of im super OP i dont need help like who would take on extra work just cuz you can thats stupid
[ System Notification:- You have received an invitation to join an NPC Guild, Player 'TheBoss' belongs to the actor class and cannot join a guild. - Jaden_Wagner3dReplied to Lazy_Pen_Master
Umm why she, was walking around the dungeon for years why when she transformes she is a loli you never expanded upon this also why does she have the mindset of a toddler? She can be illiterate due to being locked in the dungeon but unless she has some kind of debuff do to being a vampire she should have a fully functioning adult brain.
{I am new to writing romance, so I'm not sure how everyone will feel about it, but there may not be too many romantic scenes later on. But I still really like Hilda and Lisa.} - Jaden_Wagner6dCommented
How is this possible ?
Charisma (Passive) : 0 - Jaden_Wagner6dCommented
Shouldnt this be higher i mean he is from the future your telling me his will is the same as normal humans ?
Will Power (Passive) : 10 - Jaden_Wagner6dCommented
I agree keep it small and worth while i also really like Angela i think the 3 girls are all he needs
{I am new to writing romance, so I'm not sure how everyone will feel about it, but there may not be too many romantic scenes later on. But I still really like Hilda and Lisa.} - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
Eh i thought it was 1 year ago plus 18 months how did it turn into 10 years ago… so when he was 3 ?
"Many of you may not have known the arduous journey young Leon Astrahart has completed to appear today!" He said, his voice echoing, "Ten years ago, he was stricken with the uncurable Mana Poisoning disease!" - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
Why can anyone and everyone do whatever they want with no consequences what kind of messed up world is this?
"Consider yourself lucky." Franc snorted, standing as he turned and walked away. The hooded figure bowed toward Leon before walking after his older brother. - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
They are literally talking to a prince ??
"He is going to become the strongest mage since his father, Dromund Martix!" The other boy shouted, pointing at him angrily, "He is the heir to the Martix House, Lord Callum!" - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
Is he really a adult ??
"Look for someone else." Leon replied, turning around as he walked away, "I have enough friends. I need useful vassals, which you are not." - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
Only A+ for a dragon rider with a trait like that ????
[Potential: A+] - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
I thought only he and his mother where sent away why is the brother here?
"No need for formalities, you're my youngest brother's servant, not mine." Alec smiled softly, "I saw your bout with that old scrooge, you did well." - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
Umm why does this feel like i punched a cloud with all my strength what kind of racist changes so quickly?
"Get your rest tonight, because tomorrow, you're going to wish you never came here." He warned the Parthrak before turning around and departing. - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
The disrespect is to much smh
The soldiers exclaimed as they quickly formed a circle, grabbing the young lord and pulling him back as a squire rushed over, bringing two wooden swords and handing them to the commander. - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
How are more restricted then he even learned ?
[203 Martial Artes Restricted!] - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
With such high intelligence and wisdom how is is mana only 5?
[Intelligence: 10] - Jaden_Wagner8dCommented
Umm no one going to question why he is a count regent at 12 ?
[Occupation: Count Regent of Othniel Levavot Kingdom]