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Yum_q32713dCommentedThey were always on him.- Yum_q32713dCommented"The thin veil of peace had also been destroyed after Oogway's death. When he was alive, we could look at him in times of need but he is no more. The kingdoms had also noticed this and they are preparing themselves for a Great War again. With the one who maintains peace in this land gone, China needs a new moderator."
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And one for me please
"Would you like to come in and have some tea? I just brewed a fresh pot, the likes of which you've never tasted." - Yum_q32727dCommented
It will be a wonderful story, I believe, I know
Just as this thought crossed his mind, the door of the nearest red-roofed house opened. Out stepped a short, stout figure, barely a meter tall, carrying a hoe and dressed in farmer's attire. He was clearly surprised to see Wayne approaching but showed no fear. After observing him for a few seconds, he smiled and asked, "You're a human, aren't you? How did you end up in Hobbiton?" - Yum_q3271mthCommented"That's correct! This is the plane, the one and only, the cocaine of cooking, and the king of flavors, MSG!"
- Yum_q3271mthCommented"M.I.L.F!"
- Yum_q3271mthPosted
Compared to all previous works, this ranks first among the unsuccessful ones. I know that in these works you shouldn’t look for logic or thinking, just entertainment, turn off your brain and enjoy what you read. However, over the past half year or two, the overall quality of the pen has become 1.5 - 2.0 lower. The characters turn out to be too dead, I think this is due to the fact that these anime are simply not popular, but even more so due to the fact that the characters themselves in these anime are poorly developed and when reading your works with poorly developed characters, you get “dead scenes”. Maybe I'm reading too much, but this work seems more like a rough draft. In general, I noticed that in most works with action and combat systems, they turn out very poorly; it is best to write worlds and stories where the emphasis is on the uniqueness of the world, everyday life, the lives of other characters and the daily development of the MC himself. If you want to read this work, don't even think about relying on something like siscon or mangaka, She's even inferior to Tokyo Scum and Tanuki. But if you really have nothing to do and you are sure that 99% of this site is trash, then of course start. Thank you for your work, I still wish you more imagination and diligence.
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An MC who is unable to take responsibility for more than 1 woman is equal to garbage in priority. This is a fictional story and the author should not have focused on loyalty to one woman. In addition, it feels like it was written by a woman or a 16-year-old teenager. Bold fonts are just cringe when you realize that the author has completely screwed up his understanding of emotions. Thanks for the work, but only a schoolboy might like it.
- Yum_q3271mthCommentedTransmigrated into a young guy, still adorned with his bone-controlling prowess, he gained two new abilities, the first one was Bone-like equipment, Belial Djinn Equip from Magi. The second one was 'My Boner is So Special' which can make someone loyal to him after tasting his boner.
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just say china, why give readers stupid hope
"Sibyl gave me this tea. I can't taste it personally, but she said it came from the far east."detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat - Yum_q3271mthReplied to Yum_q327Douluo Continent.
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the end
Douluo Continent. - Yum_q3271mthCommentedDouluo Continent.
- Yum_q3271mthCommentedBut trying to remember all the details? That's pure fantasy.detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
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At first he rejoices like the biggest fan of this world, and then he says that he is almost unfamiliar with this world, cringe
Felix, who was no fan of Harry Potter, had to admit that he had only a basic knowledge about the plot.detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat - Yum_q3271mthCommented
If the sea breaks your boat, break this sea.
"And what if it breaks down in the middle of the sea?" - Yum_q3271mthCommented
watch anime in 2024
Yes, unlike the excitement of a typical protagonist transmigrating to another world, Durin was a complete transmigration hater. He preferred staying at home, catching up on the latest anime, watching his waifus change every three months, and playing games he could never win. Compared to being a noble in this dilapidated castle where he couldn't even watch TV, that life would've been thousands of times happier. - Yum_q3271mthCommented
skip the prologue - this is my ninja way
(P.S: The first five chapters are introductions and include a time skip. The MC will go to the Danmachi world after chapter 5. So, don't skip these chapters if you don't want to be confused later on.) - Yum_q3271mthCommented"I could never have imagined that I, Alexander Chase, who achieved sudden fame, would one day find myself pursued and hunted by the very characters I created! What sort of madness is this?!"