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- SleepyMaker6mthReplied to Ramuda_Amemura
I could work with that. maybe a bit more bulky like a calthetics person
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giga chad
A man with a tall body and handsome features, resembling an ancient Greek sculpture, stood there with one hand behind his back, extending his hand to catch the recorder. - SleepyMaker8mthReplied to The_Heaven
at that point, forget about his family. He should marry him instead
With his new appearance, anyone who laid their gaze on him would've scan his entire figure immediately. It wasn't surprising, considering his figure that has been enhanced be [Divine Physique] was a pinnacle and the true embodiment of masculine beauty. It wasn't something anyone could easily ignore. - SleepyMaker9mthCommentedCh 4 A Relaxing Morning (R18+)
- SleepyMaker9mthReplied to Saint_Hubris
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Tho writing quality isn't all that bad. Just needs some improvement. I suggest you use ai to check for spelling and grammatical mistakes to improve your work. and not write the story. If u for example put in your paragraph and it changes and tweaks it add improvements you'd think help and when u feel satisfied with the outcome I guess post it
- SleepyMaker9mthCommented
don't give him bs lean swimmer body physique please. Bakis build would be nice
This book has been deleted. - SleepyMaker9mthReplied to Jackoftrades
let the mc hit
[Image of Yumi] - SleepyMaker9mthReplied to Athrium
- SleepyMaker9mthReplied to iLhamzki
not in particular. You only needed to add the compatibility the using 2 weapons have. e.g. A galdius and a shield. Or guns. Cuz in general 2 weapons of the same length wouldn't be a good match when swinging and would get in the way. (prob not daggers) (even tho daggers shouldn't be used for fighting and more for assassination or throwing) Ofc just saying. But this is a fantasy story so who am i to say anything.
'My luck rank should be at A-rank at this point…' - SleepyMaker10mthReplied to Morg535
guess just imagine the nano machine training but in a room I guess? But the room prob uses some kind of faceless attacker
Back at home, Renault went directly to the basement and started today's training. He obtained this training room by lottery through the system before. Besides daily training, there were also various battle stages. Every time he passed a level, he would receive a reward. However, Renault had only passed the first level so far, and he had not succeeded in the second level yet.