Hassan_Baig
Writing
of reading
148
Read books
why the heck is this issue or this little children fight being discussed for 3 whole chapters. first of all Nara are too lazy to bully, akimichi are too innocent or too interested in food to bully, only yamanaka remains but that still unlikely. Hyuga kids are always very disciplined. it won't ever happen with them. it could only be civilian kids who could do that. also why is it still being discussed that children will be kicked out of clan. clans are not sects. they can't just kick out a family member because of just children fight. does the author have toddler thinking?.
itama?.
juchi
SENUCH SENHA UCHISEN
at this point I'm wondering what is even the point of staying at the school. what is stopping him from becoming a terrorist and just blowing up his father in the white room along with the entire first year dormitory. as well as the principal
so is this novel harem or not?.
when will he do lightening. I think the author has forgotten that firebenders can also lightening bend.
why is the author breaking 4rg dimension so often. it breaks immersion. does the writing ever go in past tense or is the whole story in present tense. there are so many grammatical mistakes that it is making my head hurt.
he is how old at this time?.
although talk no jutsu is scorned so much. but most of the time it is believable. the villains in Naruto well most of them didn't start that way. they just need an emotional connection to turn them back to humans from their pedestals. and when 2 shinobis are strong enough they don't even need to communicate with words their most sincere thoughts are laid bare to the other's mind if they wanted to, even their emotions. That's why the talk no jutsu worked the way it did.
why the heck would Danzo yell all of this. he was way more subtle in his threats. reference to his talk with Itachi.
what a way to give your identity to your enemy so that it can target you more comfortably.
i would kidnap her and made preparation for her entry into the Uchiha.
tbbt referamce
this is how the rivalry goes. 1. leaf vs cloud 2. leaf vs stone 3. leaf vs mist 4. sand vs stone 5. cloud vs mist 6. leaf +sand some times 7. cloud + stone some times. 8. mist + stone sometimes.
this book has become a parody.
first tail beast level of chakra. wrote himself into a block. then sin of seal for nerfing. when complained by reader. then introduced kekkei genkais BS. if kekkei genkais were so easy to be learnt just by having different natures. Every jounin would be able to form a kekkei genkai. this is just stupid.
and why were they important to mc. we weren't shown a single moment for these characters that would seem like they weren't in the background.