he went from nice kid to a psychopath getting addicted to a power complex

this is a good story keep up the good work.

this is a great read keep up the great work.

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he arc angel of course he going to be op for human less it some like Lucifer or a demon close to Lucifer power level. a false God would give him a run but that about it

why does he not heal his uncle

i would like to see how Gwen dad reacted to this event

lunch

make one

if you need a break from writing this it fine to take a break. i would rather have you stop for short amount of time then have you drop the story all together. so if you need take a break just don't drop this GREAT STORY!!

space

no

i like the book. but i hate when people do system that it like do this or die. because if i was that character i would tell them to do it and get it over with.

i thought the earth king was annge childhood friend when he visit the earth kingdom.

keep up the good work..........................................................................................................................

it is a great read. keep up the good work..............................................................................................................

the whole sharingan has been use to death and really wouldn't the sharingan be useless almost. In a magical world. because the reason that the sharingan can copy jutsu that the can see there hand sign so the can copy it. but in a magical word they don't. and the whole genjutsu might not work if the word has something like harry potter. where the have defenses against mind arts.

why would you make a book about magic with a sharingan when the alpha stigma is so much better. because the alpha stigma can copy all magic even if it not completed or incorrect it would fix it.

a good read

The Legend of the Legendary hero