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Honestly I was excited to read this because it sounded interesting from the synopsis and the other reviews I read but man, I am 8 chapters in and I just can't continue it anymore. The story is so hard to follow because of how fast paced it is and the inability to create a clear picture of the events happening. I had high hope and I wish the best for the author if this is his first book but there just needs to be more structure and care for a story like this to shine.
This is turning into a mess, gone for days in the dungeon when he is still in school and says he can't miss classes, with no explanation on how thats okay. Then the cliche win against the demon and getting a power up, I wish it wasn't as troupe heavy and had some actual consequences or growth instead of making dumb decisions like entering the castle right after saying how he should be more careful and defeating a dangerous foe just like any other story😪
Omg! I think ive read the previous version of this story before and im soooo glad I found the newer version with more chapters at a constant speed! I really loved this story and I look forward to what you make or change in the future! Good luck author, im rooting for you!😁
This is a plagiarized story and does not deserve any power stones or support. The real author deserves the credit and recognition of creating a great story. Do not support this stolen work!
I really am enjoying this book so far, it has flaws but overall I say this is worth a read at least. My main problem with this book is the over-explanation of the character, his motives, the world, and many other parts. I find that it takes me out of the moments a lot especially with so many coincidences happening all the time, gets a little predictable but I think it can improve as time goes on.
I have really enjoyed reading so far but Holy these last chapters have just been power up after power up where the vandals just lose and lose and lose against a newbie expert thats shouldn't be tough when compared to a hundred mech all focusing on her. honestly ruined my experience and gonna skip chapters til this plot Armour finishes
Ok, I thought I'd give this a chance and see how it turns out, then I read where she said his beard is "sexy" and I lost it. I'm sorry but please don't force stuff like this! Its just sad and cringe. And now he exposed himself!!!??? Really?? I can't understand what's going on in the MCs head!??
The fact that players that have spent 2 to 3 years playing this game don't know about invisibility potions and he has to make them say "there's no other way for him to disappear other than logging out" really just took me out of the story and made me cringe so bad. its been alright so far but that just killed all my interest in this chapter. I hope it gets better