Review Detail of Bust_A_Cap in Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Honestly I was excited to read this because it sounded interesting from the synopsis and the other reviews I read but man, I am 8 chapters in and I just can't continue it anymore. The story is so hard to follow because of how fast paced it is and the inability to create a clear picture of the events happening. I had high hope and I wish the best for the author if this is his first book but there just needs to be more structure and care for a story like this to shine.