Genial, hasta ahora la novela me ha gustado mucho, sigue así.[img=recommend]

Hombre, falta la escena del sexo

Good novel, I think it's refreshing, I haven't found another novel like it, keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter, I want more!!!!

Gracias por el capitulo, buena novela, sigue así.

Espero que en futuros capítulos la palabra "ok" no se use tanto o en absoluto, porque se siente raro.

I'm currently on chapter 13 and the story is going quite well, it has good grammar and plot, I hope it continues like this.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Buen capitulo, pero espero que no vuelva a tomar alcohol, menos si después de un vaso quedó tan borracho

exactly

Thanks for the chapter, one thing that was uncomfortable to read and didn't add up was when he asked for the water and told her why he was asking for the water.

La idea del fanfic es muy buena, pero creo que falla en que es muy apresurado todo, hubo ocasiones en que tuve que leer varias veces para comprender, me da la impresión de que el autor escribía para si mismo y no pensaba desde la perspectiva del lector, creo que una reescritura le vendría bien.

regulation I hope that PJ learns to fight, first the friend and now the new boy at any moment receives a beating, he seemed like a very good person and quite naive until now. The rest is pretty good, the fanfic is solid.

good novel, pretty solid, but I hope you continue the iCarly fanfic, it was good and there are no fanfics for that show.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter, I'm watching this after letting the chapters accumulate, so I don't remember the personality of the protagonist, but I felt it was silly.

Emma x Bas, no felton

Can you give me the link or tell me the name? because I looked for it with the same name as this fic but I couldn't find it

In the comments of the chapters where it is mentioned that she is pretty, you can find the image.

I think it's the best Marvel fanfic I've ever read, keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I don't know if I understood correctly what you wrote (I use a translator), but if I really understood then there is.

I have read up to chapter 622 and if it is not the best novel I have read, it is in the top 3 for sure, highly recommended.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]