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Christina_Fortune2mthCommentedDidn't it say that Ling Tian didn't have a tail? How can he transform?
"Vegeta, liberas una luna artificial en el cielo. Broly y Paragus, yo y yo nos transformaremos primero en Super Saiyan 4", dijo Ling Tian.- Christina_Fortune4mthCommented
What does "RFL" mean?
RFL: 27 - Christina_Fortune5mthReplied to OGVipex
- Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
Thanks for the chapter. By the way, what happened to the update schedule? Also, if you haven't continued with the chapters after the current chapters posted, how about posting chapters involving everyone present that can currently see Max and his reincarnations seeing his past experiences. Maybe you can show them a day of each of the souls past including Max's current soul when it gets sucked into that portal. I don't know if that's the way it was supposed to go but it's just an idea. Like maybe the last day Bardock and Cumber were in the present before the fall of Planet Vegeta for Cumber or a day when he's working on killing off an entire planet with his team? I think that should make it something interesting to read. But this is only an idea for if and I repeat if you haven't already written up your continued chapters already. Just have fun with it, but please, please, please don't drop it.
This book has been deleted. - Christina_Fortune7mthReplied to Aht
Hey, when are you going to update the story? I'd like to read more please.
This book has been deleted. - Christina_Fortune7mthCommentedCh 1 Return to Monke
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Please more chapters soon. It's been at least a year since this note was written.
I'm not done with this, just got lost on the road of life, literallly, I'll start posting soon, I'll know actions speak louder than words, so you'll see more chapters from now on. Thanks for waiting. - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
What's a "scout"? At least in this. It doesn't make any sense. Do you mean "scalp"?
As The water Massaged my scout and ran down my body, I closed my eyes; The thoughts from my mind were completely washed away for this brief moment. - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
I think Rebecca should be the daughter's name, not the mother's. "Rebecca grabbed her daughter and headed to her car back home."
Rebecca grabbed her daughter and headed to her car back home. "What was that all about mom?" Rebecca asked confused, "I will tell you when you are old enough to understand sweetie." Her mother replied, the deadpanned look still on her face. - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
So, I'm pretty sure you don't mean "foreheadhead". Is it just supposed to be "forehead"? Or maybe "head" instead?
"So let me get this straight." I sighed rubbing my foreheadhead, "You mean to tell me that because I completely demolished your Uncle who is the king of the moon or something, and the entire army of moon-men; that makes me King by combat or something?"I asked, in slight disbelief but understanding. - Christina_Fortune7mthReplied to ElliotJackson2
It's okay. It's still a good story. Please continue writing this story and please don't drop it. I'm so excited to read more.
I shook my head, Not right now...I must focus on training... But here...it's not safe for me to use Key Blasts...I moved in a circular motion and a magical golden portal slowly formed in front of me as I stepped in it to the moon, I sensed multiple presences in it, not only that but I also felt something within me shift, a primal urge within me... - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
Continue this story. +1
Do you wish for me to continue this story? - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
Thank you so much for all your hard work, and congratulations on getting your old laptop cleaned up and being able to use your old account soon again.
On the bright side I am getting my old laptop cleaned up, so I should be able to use my other account too soon again, Have a good rest of the day. - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
"before she"... I think there's a part missing here. Please fix it. Good read by the way. I really enjoy it.
She slowly regained her composure, before she - Christina_Fortune7mthCommented
Pretty sure "key blasts" are supposed to be "ki blasts" but I could be wrong. Anyways, love the story. It's fun to read. Keep up the good work.
I shook my head, Not right now...I must focus on training... But here...it's not safe for me to use Key Blasts...I moved in a circular motion and a magical golden portal slowly formed in front of me as I stepped in it to the moon, I sensed multiple presences in it, not only that but I also felt something within me shift, a primal urge within me... - Christina_Fortune8mthReplied to Shane_Town
More please. I enjoyed it a lot. Are you going to post any new chapters soon? Will there be an update schedule?
This book has been deleted. - Christina_Fortune8mthCommented
I thought he now has blue eyes.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Christina_Fortune8mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1
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Where did Gohan learn the word "humans" from when he lives in a place where they use a different word instead to refer to humans?
"Maybe our hormones go faster than humans." Gohan offered, "Which is why we are able to act more mature than other kids our age."