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new chapter :)

Appreciate the review. The plot twist with the god at the beginning was kind of on the go writing. Thanks! I will try and keep up writing, currently in school so most chapters come out in bulk on the weekend.

Nope

I had but now im back babbbyyy. You want me to continue?

Done

Did what you suggested and just added a few sentences that say his current health points.

Okay ill go change it. I was just trying to stream line it so that remembering abilities is not that hard and I don't have to keep reposting them. Do you think I should just have the description once and then just always assume the reader knows what it is? I think I will change it to where after saying those abilities happen Ill indent a line and just say the hp left. Second Question: 100hp or 100HP or 100 hp or 100 HP? Thank you for reading my novel and giving feedback!

Hey everyone the Author here! I’m looking forward to explore the world of New Heaven and the heavens above! Please enjoy my novel and look forward to future twists,unmasks, and unique twists. The only true struggle that I need to smoothen out is the parallel heavens having the same places and monsters but making them more unique and interesting. Join the ride through the 6 heavens and the final battle!