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blazinggrimm1hCommenteddon't think Minato would have jumped. please pay close attention to the characters personality
Kazuki's words fell and the trio jumped up and cheered, shaking their arms frantically.- blazinggrimm4dCommented
really nice for him
'It's only fair to her. She wouldn't want that-' Itachi remarked, '- and it looks as if Junpei just achieved Shikai.' - blazinggrimm4dCommented
Author isn't this dangerous. If other shinigami can utilize the amount of chaos this can cause will be unimaginable imagine aizen able to use shadow clone
This time however it was two Soi Fon against Itachi, both respectively wielding lightning and wind over Suzumebachi, as they tried relentlessly to skewer Itachi with it. Copying Itachi's usage of jutsus and Kidō inline with his Zanpakutō, Soi Fon managed to do the same with Hadō, even replicating some of his jutsus like his Shadow Clone technique and Substitution Jutsu as they were both Reiatsu-based techniques now. - blazinggrimm4dCommentedCh 11 New job and a perfectly good blender?? (chapter 11)
- blazinggrimm11dCommentedCh 91 Quack Update
- blazinggrimm19dCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4: Human or Monster?
- blazinggrimm27dCommentedCh 66 Chapter 66 Book Signing Event
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why do you keep using prophet to describe Mc
As a 'prophet', he naturally knew that Biscuit is a Double-Star Stone Hunter, and he could also guess that Biscuit deliberately approached him for the Rat Jewel's bead. - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
Author what do you think of Mc learning of the Faceless technique or joining them
She also seemed kind of taken back by how I am so reckless with my life. But even if this failed, I could just scar my face, kill my traveling companions, and have a new start. No need for the Faceless Men to come after me. Though this will only be a last option kind of thing. - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
please I hope the guidance will be limited
As the runes integrated into him, Aquiles felt as if he were overflowing with power, and for a few moments, he experienced a sensation of invincibility. After the intricate runes had been meticulously carved into the essence of Aquiles's soul, God retracted his hand and said, "Remember: Once you arrive in the world, all I can do for you is guide you without ever being able to intervene in any way. Also, due to the runes I carved into your soul, you are too powerful, so if you die, not even my priests can resurrect you, as they do with other humans. Therefore, be careful!" - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
not really too straight forward, the emotions portray aren't flexible. Also your work need more work. I apologize if I wronged you with what I've said but I believe you can improve
(Does everyone like the wholesome scenes involving Tyrel and Saphira?) - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
Honestly my answer would be Yes. He doesn't need to hang around them always, maybe someth could bring them together but not that they should be 5&6 always the story will be bland
(Would everyone like Tyrel to stay away from Nephis, Sunny, and Cassia as much as possible In this fanfiction?) - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
honestly what are you doing. From the beginning the person with the most advantage has been virala with this again who can defeat him. Really annoying especially him getting the dance of annihilation four at that. with the it's playing no advantage for our guy inala to defeat him by himself honestly. No balance at all he will need the help of the other reincarnate to be able to do that
Ch 468 Virala Changes Plans - blazinggrimm1mthPosted
this book is amazing honestly, the only problem I have is the limit the Mc placed on himself subconsciously ( not wanting to kill the boar but injure) and his path to strength is limited yes versatile but limited. His age also really confusing at the end except for outside help I don't he will be as strong as the boar or rasha.
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thank you it will be best if you portray each character realistically and not the Mc having answer to everything.
Romance will be included but so will be sad moments, I want to paint true Ninja World as no one truly lives a life of a bed full of roses in that world, it will be unrealistic. - blazinggrimm1mthReplied to blazinggrimm
I mean the character template not exceeding two
And four years after his reincarnation he also awakened an assurance for his survival in this dangerous world, a template system granting him all abilities of different characters. - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
think it will be better with a single or multiple character. if you add more it will be really difficult to make this story entertaining especially when he start having sharigan and the likes
And four years after his reincarnation he also awakened an assurance for his survival in this dangerous world, a template system granting him all abilities of different characters. - blazinggrimm1mthReplied to Mobius_5trip
it's illusion really bro, you seem to underestimate illusion
"No we are not. Putting us inside a Zanpakutō not only strengthened our symbiotic relationship but also removed the restriction your human limitations placed on us, enabling us to express ourselves in the truest way to our name." - blazinggrimm1mthCommented
Author I love what you did in this chapter and previous chapters. You've highlighted that itachi hasn't fully mastered his shikai even with the relationship he has with the spirits. I wonder how strong he will become when he has full mastery over his shikai and his usage of kido and the rest.
Ch 68 Chapter 67 - Yamamoto’s Verdict - blazinggrimm1mthCommentedCh 68 Chapter 67 - Yamamoto’s Verdict