Master_0ogway
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Well. Now I'm feeling conflicted. On one hand you acknowledge deleting a review. On the other you deleted a review were someone statet his opinion. Mind telling how many stars the review had because if it was one i kind of understand otherwise you should let the review be and see how others think about it. Afterall if readers think of your MC as a psychopath or sociopath your MC either is one or your writing makes him seem like one in which case the criticism might help you reflect on writing decisions. Sorry for the bad grammer english is not my first language.
I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.
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Yeah, that kinda was my point. Him killing the guards I mean. Sure they didn't treat him right but common, do you kill anybody for insulting you? It maybe wasn't stated in the movies but for all they know he is the most dangerous prisoner/villain they ever had. So not treating him properly can be attributed to that. While him killing them given the chance proves what they fought him to be.
That honestly sounds like a good reason to give him
So it seems
The grammer is good. MC is a hipocrit and a psychopath. He is angry about having been treated wrong but does the exact same thing (even worse in my opinion). If you want to write a story were your character finds inner peace by accepting that he shall kill anything out of spite than by all means do so just use the appropriate tags like #VillainMC #DelusionalMC #PsychopathicMC #EvilMC
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