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HermitReader9430dReplied to Mrs_TNTThanks for your information but I already realized it when I suddenly thought about the world background at the later stage. So, yeah its correct to use "beam" in this arc story. I'm just confused at the beginning because I forget about the concept that beam equal to something like teleport. 😂
After saying that, he beamed away. Cass caressed his wrist. He could still feel the warmth of Bastian's lips. He sighed in annoyance. Why is Hades so infuriating? Cass turned off the light and lay down.- HermitReader943mthCommentedCh 139 4.24 Whispers of Soulmates
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Repeat part until the end 😩
This paragraph has been deleted. - HermitReader943mthReplied to Hawa_Kim
it's okay..just maybe sometime, you need to read your writing per chapter one more time b4 you send to post it. it will help in reducing many typos that will change the meaning in the sentence you want to portray. btw, i really like the story progressing right now. keep it up 🥰
Like the palace and residence of the royal families and aristocrat families, there were several gateways into ones residence. And King Pingxi's residence had about five gateways. The front gateway which is the main gateway of the residence, north, south, east and west gateways. Yanzhi decided them not use the main gate and avoid disturbances and instead use the east gateway which was closer to their allocated courtyard. His little wife was too tired to accompany people for small meaningless talks, so he chose to avoid the people in the main house and take his little wife back to their courtyard to rest and regain back his strength. His little wife's completion was depressing to him because it wasn't as rosy as when they first left the house, but it was much better than a couple of minutes ago when there was no colour on his little wife's face. - HermitReader943mthCommented
*complexion
Like the palace and residence of the royal families and aristocrat families, there were several gateways into ones residence. And King Pingxi's residence had about five gateways. The front gateway which is the main gateway of the residence, north, south, east and west gateways. Yanzhi decided them not use the main gate and avoid disturbances and instead use the east gateway which was closer to their allocated courtyard. His little wife was too tired to accompany people for small meaningless talks, so he chose to avoid the people in the main house and take his little wife back to their courtyard to rest and regain back his strength. His little wife's completion was depressing to him because it wasn't as rosy as when they first left the house, but it was much better than a couple of minutes ago when there was no colour on his little wife's face. - HermitReader943mthCommented
faring instead of fairing..😊
They went straight for the village after they left Huichun, they first visited the village head and invited him before they head to grandma Shen and Dahu's house and invited them too. When they arrived home YanZhi, Xiao Ling and Yue got down from the carriage and head to the path of the mountain. They decided to pass by the construction site and see how things were fairing and how the house was coming up.... - HermitReader944mthCommentedCh 162 Chapter 162: Awakening
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Maybe because right now, he is in different dimension/place..not in his room. So, if he die he still not sure if he will be back to his room or not. It's like he suddenly disappeared from his room without anyone known.
If misfortune befell him here, his foster parents would assume that he had disappeared without a trace. If they underwent the hardship of searching for him all around the world, and then discovered he had died, how would the old folks bear that pain? - HermitReader944mthCommentedCh 389 Chapter 381. Suicidal Loyalist
- HermitReader944mthCommentedCh 381 Chapter 373. Bloodlink
- HermitReader944mthCommentedCh 1 Yu Nianzhen
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is it "get out of my body"? not "get off my body"? i thought it has different meaning when you used it in a sentence. 🤔
Seeing Miller, who was still lying on top of him, ready to do whatever he wanted, Austin said in a sharp voice, "I'm saying one last time, get out of my body!" - HermitReader945mthCommented"Like how you eliminate House Ishtera?"
- HermitReader945mthCommentedCh 71 Chapter 71: Banquet and Inspiration
- HermitReader945mthCommentedCh 58 Chapter 58: Qin Lang Makes his Appearance
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Why don't you included their full name? It's quite confusing because their name are the same..when you included their family name, the reader can easily differentiate which Su Yu you refer to and isn't this novel other name is "Killing Grounds of Gods and Devils"? I saw that the MC name is Wu Suyu and the other one is Su Suyu because sometimes their surname were mentioned in MTL. Just my 2 cents.🤔
Ch 8 Chapter 6: The Squad of 31 People - HermitReader945mthCommentedCh 158 Chapter 158: New Ideas from Foolishness (Birthday + Update)
- HermitReader945mthCommentedCh 102 3.29 Ever again