Impressed!

Great story!

Amazing novel! This story's a really original take on the traditional harry potter fanfiction and I have to say I'm really loving it. Keep up the great work!

Seems interesting. Never read this particular genre of fanfic but i'm interested to see where it goes. While the word count filler is a bit annoying, I don't think it's the end of the world...

Great story! I really enjoy the characters and how they organically meet. I do think some parts like taking Luke's first meeting with Annabeth and just inserting Alex is something I would avoid doing too much, but aside from that everything flowed great and felt original/organic to the story.

Seems good so far. I really like the twist in his upbringing. Probably could do with a bit more emphasis on his experimenting with what he can do with his powers, but on the bright side it doesn't seem like he just gets everything instantly handed to him or is far too powerful. Great work!

Despite having never actually watched twilight, the story is still fantastic and easy to follow. Really just an impressive job and I'm a sucker for stories about immortals from the beginning of time!

Overall very good story, with some elements being a bit overdone (like his weapon), making the character feel too strong and childish. Definitely worth a read despite this, especially as the author seems to be gravitating away from this in the later stages. Interesting dive into the powers the characters possesses and I feel the sarcasm from the books is well captured without feeling like the MC's a copy of Percy.

Absolutely loving it, the update pace is incredible and the story is pretty much perfect. Plot is really interesting and it doesn't jump the gun on making him a star, but gradually builds him up. Really excited to see where this goes!

+1

Really interesting short-story, amazing work! The flashbacks are executed perfectly and stay coherent throughout the story. Honestly one of the books I'm most excited about on this website despite currently only having 9 chapters... looking forwards to the rest!!

Looking forwards to the rest. Mc has interesting perks that while powerful don't instantly place him over everyone else. I hope the story keeps the original emphasis of exploration and trade rather than him becoming a lord or even king...

Pretty much perfect, it has a real emotional depth throughout its entirety. The story is honestly probably the best GOT fanfic on this entire website...

Honestly pretty good start, nice introduction and I really enjoyed the reasons for the MC's personality, as it's often ignored in stories like this one. A few touch ups needed on the writing, but nothing too distracting. Great work! Looking forwards to the rest of this story...

Looking like a potentially great fanfic, hope it's continued! I like the idea and gradually seeing the character developing towards what's hinted at in the first chapter is done seemlessly.

Really a shame this has been dropped. It really had a great start but doesn't really go anywhere with only 6 chapters... Hope it's updated or someone else makes something similar.

Worthwhile read, the character is consistent in his actions while still being able to change as he grows. My feedback would be that some of the specifics about his powers could have been better explained & uncovered as the story went on.

Awful writing to the point of being unreadable... While the premise might be of some interest there's in its current state it's a waste of time.

Interesting premise, but is lacking a fleshed out background. Overall good writing despite it being pretty short... I just wish it involved the show's characters more.

wdym your turn? It’s not like you protected him, you convinced him to come to a place where he’s more likely to be bullied or even killed and then failed miserably at defending him…