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I say stay human. Staying human keeps in line with the alchemist theme we have going on. The dragon aspect of this story is honestly less pivotal than the alchemist aspect. Stick with being a hyper-intelligent Merlin/magical Tony Stark. This isn't some punchy dragon stuff it's tinker slap face stuff.
My biggest problem here is that you aged everyone up but kept going as if they were still high schoolers. For example the powersacling issue from earlier, they had 4 more years to train their quirks. You also made UA function like a highschool despite it being a university. Honestly I think you only aged them up so it wouldn’t be weird to write about pairings. Basically you made everyone more grown without actually take the time to scale up the world around them.
I just thought about it. The mc’s curse technique isn’t adaption rather it’s advanced curse manipulation. He uses patterns that make adaptations, this middle step means that adaptations isn’t actually his cursed technique . For example you know those cakes that look like real objects? Are those cakes or the object they look like. Same thing here, it isn’t adaptions but curse manipulation via patterns.
In people's defense, most novels are dropped by the time you hit chapter 10. Generally, if it starts off and things aren't going the way they like it's gonna end worse.
He can turn is body into ice just like in one piece. It’s actually cool cuz he doesn’t age while in ice mode, in the comics he had stayed in ice mode before to live longer.