The chatter of a child who understands nothing in the world. Useless chapter.

AI has a tendency to make things overly dramatic for nothing and use words that could completely misrepresent the character's personality. This is why you should not hesitate to delete all the elements that do not correspond to what you basically wanted to write. Long descriptions of places with words that only chatgpt uses are also annoying for readers accustomed to using AI. My advice is to simplify this type of paragraph as much as possible.

Either the author has a problem and doesn't know how to use the words "Determination" and "Precision". Either they are garbage paragraphs generated by AI.

The beginning might put some people off due to the unnecessary and repetitive Chatgpt paragraphs. But I advise you to be patient, because very quickly things improve and these kinds of paragraphs disappear completely. This is a fanfiction set in the world of Harry Potter, with a similar energy to JJK and innate cursed techniques. The author has perfectly combined the two universes, so don't worry. Harry Potter in this world is a girl, her name is Rose Potter. I know some people don't like it, but I assure you it works great. Know that this is one of the best fanfics on this site. The author knows how to bring his characters to life very well. In addition, the interaction between the characters is very well done, nothing is annoying, everything is fluid and perfect. I like Asterion's personality, even more that of Rose who looks like a female version of Gojo, the interactions between the two are never boring. It's a well-deserved 5 star.

I think the author sabotaged himself by making Kira able to defend and attack at the same time. There is no more suspense in the matches, even against the U20s.

Dropped. Not killing Danzo when the opportunity presents itself is just stupid and unjustifiable no matter the reasoning. Trying to scare him is even more stupid, even an ordinary Ninja Root doesn't know fear and is ready to kill himself at any time, let alone Danzo.

Ptddrrr le boug s'appelle Astérion, c'est mort je pourrais jamais lire ça me rappelle trop un certain déchet de twitter et youtube (Kirby54). Mais je vais quand même donner un 5 étoiles a l'auteur car ce n'est pas de sa faute.

One of the best Marvel fanfictions, with a balanced MC who is neither absurdly cruel nor ridiculously compassionate. I would have liked him to keep the memories of the original Peter, I think it would be better for the story, but hey I can understand if the author doesn't want that. I would add that I didn't like the name of the fanfiction, because I wasn't interested in a half-lizard MC. This put me off reading for a long time, but I was wrong, it's incredible. For those who are hesitant because of this, know that it is more of a “Draconic Adventure” than a “Reptilian Adventure”, which changes everything.

IA loooool

Isn't this Twin City University?

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This is without a doubt the best LoL/Arcane fanfic I've read. .................................................................

Chatgpt ?

The synopsis triggers my chatgpt sense. I wonder if this is really the case? Because these paragraphs are really annoying and I don't like them at all. If this is used in the novel, I will cringe a lot. Is that the case ? If Chatgpt is only used for the synopsis, I recommend changing it, because there are many people like me who might not read just because of this.

Best DC fanfic so far, I'm waiting to see if the story will continue to evolve in the right direction. I hope the author will be able to manage the Harem, and not make his MC a Pokémon trainer.

Good start, but the sequel is disappointing. I feel like I've read the same thing hundreds of times. An expert protagonist in all fields who collects girls by helping them or impressing them with his skills. Even the characters are the same, girls like Utaha often come back in this type of fanfic, so much so that we get sick of them. In short, nothing new, for me it's copy and paste. But hey, some people might like it, I suppose.

I'm really starting to believe this is a chatgpt generation, a normal human wouldn't repeat the same paragraphs so many times just changing the wording, unless they were crazy.

Author, do you realize that you have been repeating the same paragraph for several chapters?

it really looks like a chatgpt paragraphs.

A stupid MC is easier to write for stupid authors.