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Merle8888

Merle8888

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2019-10-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Merle8888
    Merle88881yr
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    I've decided to write a review today after I read the anticipated chapter of the story, the kiss scene. I must say the author did a great job in building the world, arranging every part nicely. Keep going.

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    Fantasy · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Merle8888
    Merle88881yr
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    The moment!

    Though she came to him bravely, she couldn't bring herself to kiss him properly, barely touching his lips, she held it for a mere 3 seconds and loosened herself away from him, while the protagonist stood erect in his position all the while, unable to decipher what just happened. 
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    Fantasy · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Merle8888
    Merle88881yr
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    She is sweet.

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    Fantasy · trumpet_creeper01
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