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1 chap a day is good this the best the 100 fanfic here anyways
Ur fight scene was way too fast paced and u jumped during saying they were going at it for 10 mins u need to take a breath and slow things down a bit so it can be more interesting. If u keep it so fast paced how will important fights go down u feel me. Just a bit of advice maybe watch some fight movies u don’ have to know the names of moves just describe em like I went in swinging from his right with my scythe but he put up a barrier that blocked it. I took a step back a blurred to directly above him and tried a overheard strike but again the barrier blocked me…
“ Less than zero” dc its on fanfiction.net “Practicality saves the day” xmen “going native” Dbz/dc Its on fanfiction.net and spacebattles
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