Review Detail of Anthony_Marte in The reincarnated uchiha of rwby

Ur fight scene was way too fast paced and u jumped during saying they were going at it for 10 mins u need to take a breath and slow things down a bit so it can be more interesting. If u keep it so fast paced how will important fights go down u feel me. Just a bit of advice maybe watch some fight movies u don’ have to know the names of moves just describe em like I went in swinging from his right with my scythe but he put up a barrier that blocked it. I took a step back a blurred to directly above him and tried a overheard strike but again the barrier blocked me…