Three Eyed Crow*

the women usually just keep their family name when the marry. ex. Catelyn Tull, Lisa Tully, Cersie Lannister, also they don't use the the husband's family name in front of their maiden names. there is no Elia Targaryen nee Martell. it's just Elia Nymeros Martell. that's the full name not just Martell but Nymeros Martell. they are the only known family to have to names and that's only to honor Princess Nymeria.

exactly duel wielding so lame. Arthur Dayne only had his families ancestral sword, The Star Forged Sword Dawn. made from a fallen star which is the reason why it is milkwhite in color.

maybe change the name of Anissa to sound more Valyrian? something like Aenaesa?

that's just a lame theory. the Hightower doesn't control the maesters or the septons. there's no proof of it at all in the books and is only a weak excuse of a theory that people who watch TV shows only came up with.

Most overrated character and all thanks to D&D and the Show. He was their favorite character so they wanked him to high heaven. if you actually look at his background info in the books, it's not that impressive. Especially not as a commander and general and even less so on a personal level. He was a good Hand and administrator and had one hell of skill in making himself look much better than he is/was.

Vice Admiral Momonga

what's the artist name for the cover?

be horny somewhere else. begone you thirsty simp.

Galen was born probly I'm 18 BBY and Order 66 was in 19 BBY since that's when his mother died on Kashyk. She died pretty soon after she gave birth defending Wookies from Trandoshan slavery, so probably at most when he was a couple of months old.

only because Mace and his mother only decided to use the entire Reachs army and Navy to besiege one single castle. They weren't truly loyal to the Targaryens, but they played their cards well. If royalist won, they could say they were siezing Storms End, the home of the man who is the figurehead behind the rebellion. if they lost, they could do as they did in canon and just bend the knee and say we only put your castle to siege and nothing else. they were playing safe because by this point, they had very stable control over the Reach due to the marriage pacts the Tyrells had formed. Olena is a Redwyne, Mace us married to Alleria Hightower, Mina again to the Redwynes and Janna to the Fossaways. only house that still grumbles about them are the Florents and they are just a single house amongst many who are loyal to the Tyrells

My bad. I was skimming the story and . must've missed the part where he refused Ser William Royce trying to pass it back to him.

MC doesn't need to make another Valyrian Steel sword. At this time House Royce has their own Valyrian Steel sword named Lamentation. Please do a little background research when writing a fanfic.

Most likely. He did say that Robert spat on the corpse of children. Which he never did. Also Robert wasn't happy about their deaths just relieved because he knew he couldn't let them live but did not want to kill them himself. Hence why he never sent any assassin's after Viserys or Daenaerys until they got hitched to the Dothraki. He was willing them to leave them alone in Essos as long as they stayed in Essos.

Shouldn't it be vampire instead of zombie? From her description it sounds more like she's a vampire.

Dacey Mormont. No reason to give such an advantage to person outside of his immediate family. In regards to Jon Snow I hope you butterfly his existence away if your going the route of R+L=J. Not because I dislike his character or such. Just hoping you'll be more creative than most writers and not just rehash canon plot points with the Mc just as an observer ala Forest Gump.

All of this is just assumptions on your part. "The way he did war" was right because he won in the end, so it is a moot point. Nonetheless I'm pretty sure it is stated in the books that Robert was great commander at war not just a great warrior. Being a good commander includes being good at strategy and logistics, you have be for everyone to consider you as having a great mind for war. As for the Battle of Ashford, Robert was ambushed by the Reaches Vanguard and soon after the main host of the Reach Army arrived to assist them. Not only was he most likely outnumbered, the Reach men were all fresh while Robert had already fought and won 3 battles in a row. Not to mention he still was able to make a strategic retreat and later win the war. So really man your just letting your hate for Robert distract you from the facts. No matter how you try to twist and portrays him as a scum and worst thing since ever, you can't overturn facts stated in the books that are canon.

I could not find mention of the drunkenly Steffon event happening anywhere. Can you cite the source or chapter?

You must've not ready many ASOIAF stories than if you consider this as "One of the Best". Head on over to Alternatehistory, spacebattle, sufficientvelocity, fanfiction,net and archiveofourown. Those are good sites to find some amazing fanfic. Writers have very good grammer and some good storytelling ability. Webnovel is probably one of the worst sites for GoT/ASOIAF fanfics.

There is no scheming going on...your plot is MC= GOD everyone else = Dumb Lackwit.