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The novel has bad grammar, the story progressed correctly until in my opinion the author was forced to demonstrate his nationalism because after that the novel began to get worse, it no longer felt like the author was the same as before, his work feels like it lost its shine and now he is resigned to a regrettable fate that he detests.I really dislike that authors are forced to ruin their works because their governments want their nationalism to be demonstrated, otherwise they will suffer various sanctions or for a few credits
Reading this book is like reading an old book in poor condition since it seems to be missing many essential parts, making the story not fit together well. In other words, this story has too many holes in its character development, plot, and mysteries, making one think that there are many writers who are writing this story without agreeing.
Good novel but after the protagonist joins the sect the protagonist becomes a boring little shit all he does is kill and steal and doesn't really make an effort to survive a lot of emotion and even more so when he only kills using poisons that he doesn't even know how to use correctly, his poisons feel very mediocre and his personality goes from bad to worse so much is expected that he ends up dying because he acts so idiotic. I go from being a sneaky guy with great power to being mediocre with limited potential to give him a dominant development, I would really like to kick him I really want to continue reading this but the protagonist becomes more and more unpleasant, apparently using so many poisons made the protagonist go crazy and stupid, they only think about killing and the author's way of romanticizing mass murder is unpleasant, clearly the protagonist is evil, I don't understand why the author wants to make us think otherwise with so many excuses that he is the good guy and is just another victim of the world, he clearly does nothing to avoid that while he decides to follow that path. From what I read, the protagonist soon starts killing everyone who looks at him wrong. Really unpleasant.
After he conquers the continent the story becomes rushed and careless in many ways they are forgotten and not explained, the protagonist starts to neglect his Feys, he focuses more on his new followers than on his own power over and over again until he gets a new minion much more powerful than the last.I especially disliked how little is explained about the new old gems. I hope the author remedies the story because I feel like it's going downhill
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