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Naaaaaaa6mthReplied to WallboiidetailWhat Do You Call a Benevolent and Reasonable Person in Xianxia? An ImpAnime & Comics · Eurasia_Argent- Naaaaaaa6mthReplied to jhersendetailWhat Do You Call a Benevolent and Reasonable Person in Xianxia? An ImpAnime & Comics · Eurasia_Argent
- Naaaaaaa6mthReplied to Wallboii
i believe its this https://www.scribblehub.com/series/616261/what-do-you-call-a-benevolent-and-reasonable-person-in-xianxia-an-impossibility-btth/
detailWhat Do You Call a Benevolent and Reasonable Person in Xianxia? An ImpAnime & Comics · Eurasia_Argent - Naaaaaaa11mthReplied to I_cant_choose_name
Depends on the area as Japan has areas it can be lower as 13 to 16 is the range according to google
I'm sure one could guess as to what had actually happened afterwards. After all, despite her being in jail for statutory rape she was actually my first time. Not that I was the one who charged her for assault, that was all the camera watched her in the office. - Naaaaaaa11mthCommented"Meow." It said in a very deep voice.
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommented
“You have failed the vibe check”
Alternate Title: Butterfree Era Starts Here; Loki Lost to That Ass; Declined Trade Talks; Jackal's Vibes Accepts no Survivor; Lili Being the Perfect P.A.; Threesome Date?; Rose, Take Your Job Seriously!; The Slap of Aphrodisia; Jackal's Potions Being a Menace to the Society; The World's Hottest Threesome; Shakti Snaps; Shakti's Mortal Enemy; The Meat Benders; Fading Smile; Dark Truths; Reason of Happiness and Sadness; Jackal's Vow; Maria's Reminder; Maria's Wish; The Helpless and the Brute; The Heaven Weeps For What's To Come Next - Naaaaaaa1yrCommentedCh 44 Dinner, and a Heart to Heart Talk
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommentedCh 43 Magical Girl Sylveon is BACK!
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommentedThe Sylveon grinned even wider and raised the weapon to inspect it. "It appears that my prayers have been answered! Evil shall tremble at the sight of this symbol of unity and bloodshed! I shall call it: the PAINSWORD! Half chainsaw, half sword, and all pain!"
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommentedCh 38 Cobras, Lamias, and Sphinxes. Oh My!
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommented
This sounds like an amazing idea fr a story to follow
(A/N: Izuku about to be promoted from Vice Representative to Vice Principal...) - Naaaaaaa1yrCommented
When grapple hook
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Cough*DoGCough*
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imagine soul of eternity from Fargo's soul mod xD
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who's Jake?
"Jake, the world is a dangerous place and even gods can and have easily died due to getting overconfident and reaching where they should not have." Ei whispered into my white hair and the kitsune ears she was playing with twitched heavily at the feeling of Ei's voice so close and making the Electro Archon chuckle softly and the arm holding me against her tightened. - Naaaaaaa1yrReplied to Zxcx_17
thx for clarifying and to try :) those things mentioned as negitives aren't really that for me, they are story points used to build character and help world building the only reasonI I "warned" about them in my review is cuz ppl on this site seem to have an unhealthy obsession of complaining about them (no that much as in the past from what I can see) so I hope this didn't feel as harsh as I might be imagining. Anyways your doing amazing work so far and keep it up. criticisms are subjective and therefore can be ignored or absorbed into a story so do with your works as you want and the ppl who like it will stay and those who don't should not nit pick about the things that are there for the story like complaining about the plot in a point in the story where it will most likely be explained later. Again the story you are making so far is amazing and I hope you enjoy your time writing it :)
- Naaaaaaa1yrPosted
Can't really say much cuz this story only has 2 chapters but this is really good so far. From what I can get from this so far is that the author is really good at setting an atmosphere that can get you to really feel how the characters mind set are in the given situations. This is a warning because there are ppl in this site that dont like this for whatever reason but this story is most likely a SI / OC, harem, power fantasy, and a tiny bit of time stuff. As a disclamer this doesn't mean that this is bad but that they will likely exist in this ff to a verring degree. There might be a problem for some people to get into this cuz this will likely take lore stuff from the game so you might want to have a passing familiarity with arknights to get the "full experience" whatever that means to you. Going back to what this story so far I feel does pretty good on is that there are little to no gramatical errors i can find but thats not saying much as im a casual reader that wouldn't care if it wasnt too bad. The the story is also trying to be lore accurate so if you get confused its problebly has to do with the scource material. Overall this is a pretty good story that has a lot of potential but might be hard to get into due to needing to at least have an idea about the game arknights to fully understand the intricit lore details but that isn't needed to have a fun time to enjoy what will problably be a really good story.
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommented
This the first ?
It would be another five minutes before the Spirit of the Wind would recover enough to realize that she'd been left behind. Fortunately for her, she could easily catch back up to them by returning to Kevin's soul and popping back out near them. She also learned from this mistake, and decided to never sing what Kevin called the 'second most annoying song in existence' again. - Naaaaaaa1yrCommentedCh 29 The True Bonding Ritual of Wind
- Naaaaaaa1yrCommented
To me it sounds more like ur describing Izuna from ngnl
(A/N: I suck a lot at trying to describe. Just think of Shiro from NGNL.)