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NYX531

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  • NYX531
    NYX5311mth
    Replied to NYX531

    oh and for the reply for the mc needing choice in regards to the women being a little aggressive The mc is practically a pervert who the author shows like a gentleman.firstly the mc is ok with woman who he met 2 days ago like that Japanese fl with chip she invited the mc to the house gave BJ and even had sex within 3 days since meeting now that is not aggressive at all right.Then mc had sex with succubus queen because of that bed the mc could have kept his moral but no any free pusssy is welcomed.And he even had sex with married women and even had sex with innocent girls who are pure who the mc totally don't deserve.all these things are ok but when a girl fall in love with him and kiss him he treats her like a worm and the author says it's because he chooses who want to be with .what a joke.the only reason i can think of is that the author wanted to show the mc is someone who don't do it with everyone is actually a decent person but all his action just shows he is a piece of trash.oh same with when the Japanese girls dress went off and he kissed her but the somehow he is a good person because he only kissed and did nothing else what kind of logic is this.And that shun qing when she was buying that herb she had one personality then there was a sudden 180 degree change in personality.And the 1st fl is like she see a women then she tells the mc that she is a good woman and to add her to his Harem.And there are more things like these which seem stupid but the author made it seem like it's possible to happen.

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    Otherworldly-Cultivator
    Eastern · JosieGan
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  • NYX531
    NYX5311mth
    Replied to NYX531

    Then just add the dark tag then there will be no confusion.i mainly read this novel because I loved dual cultivation dragon with a system and thought it would be similar.And for the answer about the mc taking stupid choices one example is the mc failing to control himself and having sex infront of that shun kid with his mom.i mean you are planning for revenge for so long so why create a variable that could lead to downfall and he just choose 1 person to control him from telling people the only reason the mc is not found out is because the author doesn't want him to be found out.not only that he is becoming way too arrogant during meeting the succubus queen and all.And there are a lot more things like these.And what makes me laugh is that when he first met a woman he had 2 wife then he meets her 1week or so later and he has 3 wife and 3 fiance or so.And everyone is saying you will be happy to be with him.And even after his friends were kidnapped the mc didn't do anything to keep his woman safe you can say that they can teleport to his realm but what if they are unconscious the only reason the other girl was saved from being violated is because she woke up.And about being minor.if a 25 something old person is after a 15 year old then it is disgusting and it's even more so when her parents approved it.even if you did the deed or not is not the point it's about her mind not fully being able to do the correct choice it's practically grooming.

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    Otherworldly-Cultivator
    Eastern · JosieGan
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  • NYX531
    NYX5311mth
    Posted

    I've read to ch 160 and all i can say is the mc is a hypocrite.And not only that it feels like fls and side characters just accepts whatever the mc says.i mean what was so special about him that all these girls where in love with him before he got powers.And every fl says to new Harem members that he is very gentle and what not.And he even has underage girls in Harem.And it just feels like there is no logic when mc is involved.And the mc turns down a girl just because she is aggressive in expressing her love and the fl says to her that she has to change her personality if she want to be with the mc.the mc is more like a villain if you ask me.its ok for the mc to be aggressive but not a fl.Also most of the things he does are stupid but the author just make it seem like it's a intelligent thing.oh and the world background is not that well done.

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    Otherworldly-Cultivator
    Eastern · JosieGan
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  • NYX531
    NYX5311mth
    Replied to MuChenBao

    would you trust a person you just met even if you saved her with something that can harm you if someone know you have it.

    "Give me your number; I'll contact you after I buy a new smartphone later." Chen Li replied with a nod.
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    Otherworldly-Cultivator
    Eastern · JosieGan
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  • NYX531
    NYX5311mth
    Replied to JosieGan

    I think he means a woman in her 30 is basically a lady than a young miss.

    Soon Nan Xinyue finished cleaning herself, dressed up like a young miss. Then she sat opposite Chen Li as she sipped a cup of latte. "Phew! If it weren't for your help, I don't know what would have happened to me. Perhaps I've already become those five men's playthings, and I really thank you for that. If you have any problems later, you can come to see me, and I will help you as best I can."
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Replied to Jordon_B

    same here

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    The Heretics (Gamer X DxD)
    Anime & Comics · MissRias
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Posted

    the author always Nerf the mc when there is a fight.even when he became a god just some robot was enough to put a fight.And the earth dragon collosium fight just left a bad taste.i mean the mc was very humiliated verbally and after all that he said grow stronger to his opponent and let's not talk how he was also beaten by that said person and was almost losing even though his lvl was high and was older that her.And also it's only my opinion you can leave it if you want but the romance and wife just distroy the novel and why the haram tag i mean it's like only 1 fl and her alter ego.its not a proper Harem.

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    Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Replied to Dio99

    in mtl she is 22 not 12 maybe it's a translation mistake.anyway the novel sucks and after reading the age 12 I can't get it out of my mind when reading and feels grossed out

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    Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Commented

    plz stop making the villain stupid just to show the mc as smart.

    Ch 402 Chapter 402. First face to face with the Elders. Yasenia's unstoppable momentum.
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    Heaven, Earth, Me
    Fantasy · Mortrexo
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Commented

    10% for life are you serious?why take this much loss when you can move to another city.And I know they don't have a background here and want to stay lowkey but the things they are doing are not though so it just feels forced I mean they are compromising too much and it feels annoying.

    Ch 401 Chapter 401. Ghana's change of mind. Walking into the Elders' mansion.
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    Heaven, Earth, Me
    Fantasy · Mortrexo
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Commented

    if you leave cecile Tatyana then aren't the others just moderately beautiful.

    Ch 401 Chapter 401. Ghana's change of mind. Walking into the Elders' mansion.
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    Heaven, Earth, Me
    Fantasy · Mortrexo
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Commented

    wow go red dragon go.you told him what most of the reader's want to say to that idiot.thx author for this wonderful chapter.finaly my frustrations is lessening.

    Ch 25 Chapter 6 - An angry Ddraig, More blondes and A Death of a Fallen
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    Winds of Change (DxD)
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Replied to NYX531

    oh and I'm in ch 20 if it gets better like in other reviews I'll change my current review.And each ch is very long it's like 1 ch is equal to 10 ch of other novels.

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    Winds of Change (DxD)
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Replied to NYX531

    *talk

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    Winds of Change (DxD)
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Posted

    The mc is like when a lazy neet gets op.The way he talks is really annoying.And if you take away power which was just given to him freely then he has nothing really but the girls just keep falling for him for whatever reason that i can not understand.The mc is like a character were we hope the villain has a system and distroy the mc.from the chapters i read the mc is not at all charismatic is average in looks,the way he walks to people is like a middle schooler and the lines are cliche And the author makes the mc hide his strength when he is the strongest being because he is lazy and don't want attention but then goes to big guys in factions to work as the mercenary for them and makes the 3 factions who are enemy to try peace and it worked for some reason seriously I felt like vomiting reading that chapter.basically the mc is a beta with no pride and plot Armor that author try to make look good.Oh and the personality of the characters are also changed by a large margin from original dxd.

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    Winds of Change (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Fictitiouz
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Replied to Jordinary

    oh plz that's just an excuse.the truth is looks matters unless it's in these types of novels or if your rich.And to be fair if your average there will not be any reactions like this nor will they even notice him.

    Another adds and they giggle more. Jesus Christ, what the hell is wrong with the students in this place? I shake my head. Well, whatever, after the date with Reni I expected this much of a reaction. Average at best, I'm fine with that.
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    Winds of Change (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Fictitiouz
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Commented

    i just don't understand why being a human hybrid is important just tell your a dragon god that's more believable.And at this point it's become very annoying with the hiding secrets and bragging.

    "All they know is I am a human and a middleman; you can't exactly tell I'm a Human Dragon God hybrid at a glance."
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    Winds of Change (DxD)
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Replied to NYX531

    oh and the author is really nerfing the mc. I mean it is said multiple times that she can end a plain but still gets beaten by someone in the same plain.And she has higher stats than most of her enemy and a lot of skills but out of the 100 of skills she only use like 5 and the author shows her stats like more than a 10 times when there is any change at all.and the stats are like 1/5 of the total chapters and that's not all she has no pride after ch 350 like she will lik shoe and all

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    Arpious of the Planes
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • NYX531
    NYX5312mth
    Posted

    it was good at the beginning but then it went downhill.the mc became a maso and after ch 300 she literally has no improvement in strength or stats.the children where yet another disappointment.and after chapter 400 the writing quality is very bad you can't understand anything properly And there is not much of a good world background either.And it's really confusing how the author just write some logic in the novel which is very hard to believe as it's not something a person with a brain will process.or maybe it's because of the bad writing quality so it's not conveyed properly.And during the sun and demon war arc it feels like some parts are missing.

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    Arpious of the Planes
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  • NYX531
    NYX5314mth
    Posted

    it was a really good fanfiction until it reached orv arc.in this arc the author is just trying to copy the entire orv novel by add the mc as a side character and there is also no big change in the orv arc from that of the novel it just gives the feeling of reading a wanna orv.And the arc is also very stretched out the author says it's for the people who didn't read the original novel to understand.but orv is one of the most popular novel and most of the people reading fanfic already read it so by reading this arc it's giving a vibe of rereading a shitty version of it and it boring as hell because the mc is hiding his abilities and all.all in all the 3rd arc does not make sense the author is but making reasons like it's for a big reveal and for twists but I don't think anything can make me happy after reading 130 chapters of this arc and it's still continueing.This novel has became so frustrating but the author doesn't take any advice if you tell him any negative review he just says to stop reading.

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    My Second Life in Another World
    Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
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