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Here for the beat down. Now here for bonus beat downs.
He’s going to kill them all
Do what you need to do. Get well. We’ll be here when you get back.
Calling it now. Not over!
I’ve not said this in a hot minute but that’s a flag.
I can’t wait for Lith to visit grandma with her around
It’s been wild thank you
I loved level up family… glad to find it
Read to 386 during the free period. Writing quality isn’t bad good but could use some work. MC will be placed in a corner one chapter only for him to really have done something else with out the reader knowing to get out of it so the action is a surprise to both reader and opposition. It is an interesting writing tool but it needs a little work. It gets a little old by the time the 300th chapter rolls around. The character development could use a little work. MC knows X,Y,Z because of reasons. Makes others dance in his palm and entertaining in small doses but appeal wears off. Other characters get dropped by massive time skips leaving large plot holes. I want to see how it all ends and ties together but unless something changes this will be a fast pass only read.
I read the 200 odd chapters when this was free. Writing starts strong and then starts the Peter out as he goes along. Author you’ve a great job with your world building, the character development is also coming along pretty well. MC starts weak like super weak. Slowly gets stronger and at this point he is OP already.