Silentium
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everytime she calls him greasy this image flashes through my head
if someone is dumb enough to think that- that's work. they're gonna screw it up.
I hope our mc is as terrifying as esdeath to this man
was gonna pass by without a like, but the cat convinced me
always funny when I see this type of wording. "the pain was too horrible to handle, so then I handled it" 🤣
is her entire job to look pretty and sweep?
starts out showing fl standing up for herself. meet ml instantly forced to do whatever he wants. ml demands contract of no physical contact then immediately breaks it in the same chapter. yet the fl is the one that's punished. So if you want a story about a fl that let's the ml push her around here it is. although there is good art (only positive really). Really wish I could find a story with strong fl and ml that help each other from the beginning without trying to control each other.
wow she falls asleep a lot
if you're going to do the description again on this chapter you should remove it from the previous one. it may only be a short time, but make your readers guess what his/her appearance changed to. otherwise seeing the same description again so soon after the previous one is annoying.
what you gonna do? file a complaint with hr.
my plan would've been to cause one to self destruct like the last while they were still grouped together. might get a chain reaction depending on how they were designed
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