good Book! a really pleasant one to read. There are some things that needs some upgrade like your sentences, sometimes they are too long or répétitive and then loose sense. There is a needs for a rythm in phrasing. I like the story, it changes from the old system story and i reaaally like the FL she's strong but flexible and i think we still have things to discover about her. The other characters are touching and some funny. Overall, I recommend this book. It's been a while since i found one like this. Keep goin'

I totally agree with you, the lack if editing and the mechanical translation ruins m'y reading. It would be good if the translator could finish what he started because paying for this isn't worth it at all especially since it isn't his work.

I had a really good time re-reading this story. The characters are really interesting and well-developped. We can see them grow all along the story and let's say it, it isn't easy and found on others story.So, to conclude, a really well written story that I recommand !

Shiro, being normal ? That might be interesting to see in a way that she might no be as normal as we think. And maybe there will be development on her love life. Can't wait to see what will happen!

Shiro is so OP as usual !! I want to see more battle with that New founded power. Author-san, sorry for your loss. Take time to yourself and no need to hurry for release. take Care.

Yeah she's the best at this!! And that's why WE all love her !

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I love it when they say " Why not SCAM other gods to help us!" That pas complitely unexpected but I kinf of want to see how they will scam, sorry, convince the others. I'm so looking forward to the Space weapon too !!

thanks for the gifts and Merry Xmas !

if i remember correctly it does count !! by the way nice cover