good Book! a really pleasant one to read. There are some things that needs some upgrade like your sentences, sometimes they are too long or répétitive and then loose sense. There is a needs for a rythm in phrasing. I like the story, it changes from the old system story and i reaaally like the FL she's strong but flexible and i think we still have things to discover about her. The other characters are touching and some funny. Overall, I recommend this book. It's been a while since i found one like this. Keep goin'
Kyosei
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