Never reviewed a book before, this one got enough on my nerves that it prompted me to write one. The first 18 chapters are all repetitive and could be summarized into 3-4 instead of expounding upon regular day repetitive things. BUT LET ME get to the main point. This is just a knockoff version of Monster Paradise (written by - Nucler Warhead Cooked in Wine), little bro for little sis, similar first monster card, same “system comments,” same first exam type (desert survival), same first friend (fatty), it’s pretty much all just a worse re-write of a book I loved.

This whole chapter doesn’t progress the plot at all. Mom’s debt is high cause the cost is insanely high, and we are broke, btw 100 of the previous coin makes the next coin. Congratulations you understand basic math.

22 whole chapters to finally get to the actual start of the story. Only info we really got before this was, brother, friend, card ranks, monsters, and ad hominem motivation

It’s literally just been “I love my brother” “I’m integrating into this society” “wow I’m jacked from body weight training and eating mystery meat”

It is not “had” it needs to be “can”

“Infinite Power” is a “common ability”

“How much do you want the AI to write” “Yes”

Bruh how many chapters is this fight going to be

You would think with the "Punishment" being "Death" it would be a large motivating factor for him to do so and would be worth a sentence or two saying that he did so to avoid dying.

Did he ever workout? The last chapter had him open the box with the book that took him 10 days to read. We never received confirmation on his exercise or progress on his "Get Stronger" quest that came out of nowhere.

Isn't this kid 4/5 and has no background of exercise? How is he going to run the equivalent of 6.3 Miles in a day? Additionally the workout makes no sense for a person that young. It's just a copy paste of all the other similar novels that are an easy write off to give a kid a jump in power since you handed him advanced cognition for no reason.

You are about 100 years off with your slavery dates in America.

Uncanny Valley*

The Shino Buff mice from Demon Slayer. Just add a couple variety in their powers. ( E.x. They allow him to use other Demon Slayer forms and create his own.) They could also have a ”powered up” form called the “Rat King”

Edit* It’s the peacock mantis shrimp.

Eyes of the mantis shrimp. Humans can process three channels of colour (red, green and blue), while mantis shrimps perceive the world through 12 channels of colour, and can detect UV (ultra violet) and polarised light, aspects of light humans can't access with the naked eye. The other 9 channels could be used for other abilities that are common, ex. Reaction time, supernatural vision encompassing a large field of view, etc. Plus the look cool/creepy.

Was this dropped?

Toilet pit?

Their*