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aridavid5

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  • aridavid5
    aridavid524d
    Replied to Pragmatico

    You are right the MC not an antihero at all. I got confused and thought I was responding to a comment on My Vampire System, another novel from the same author and a chronological sequel to Level Up Zombie.

    altalt
    Level up Zombie
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid526d
    Replied to Pragmatico

    A few things: (1) There is a plot reason to why the location of the University is not mentioned until much later in the novel. (2) The mc is an antihero, the novel shows a beautiful character progression. (3) I agree that the free chapters are for peaking your interest, and from what you posted this one did. Your complaint was more that there was little revealed, and you could have used the 3 free unlocks you get daily to continue reading and later decide if you want to use coins. I'm going to give you an example of the first novel series I ever read, Harry Potter. When I started reading it was shortly before the 4th book was out. There was a lot of hype. I think none of the movies had been made yet, but there was hype about them already. I hated the first chapter I fell asleep about 3 times while reading it. Yet, I had bought the book and was curious about the hype, therefore I powered through. I started slightly liking the story maybe after the 5th chapter, and now I consider it a very well written and thought out story. I loved it.

    altalt
    Level up Zombie
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid526d
    Posted

    The author does a very good job at world building, and you can see how much better he has gotten from his first book (the first was very good, it's just the new ones are better). That said, some details in the ending felt a bit anti-climatic. The explanation given to the actions of one of the pivotal side characters was a bit lackluster. Can't explain better without spoilers. All in all, I highly recommend this novel. I also recommend reading My Dragon System (Isekai as a human) followed by My Vampire System. Both are very good reads, and if you're observant you can see where the author decided to join them into the same universe.

    altalt
    Level up Zombie
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Posted

    The plot is very good and the storyline is great. However, the author repeats itself so much that half or more of the text could be removed without the story being affected in the slightest. Sometimes a paragraph is the same as the one before the previous but I'm a different order so that it relates to what was being said in the previous paragraph. Even worse sometimes a chapter is a retelling of the previous chapter with different words, and some added details. This is the reason for removing 3 stars from writing quality. I was tempted to remove 4 stars, but the actual storyline redeems it a bit.

    altalt
    Another World’s Versatile Crafting Master
    Fantasy · Zhuang Bifan
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to Keino

    She isn't. The "his" is a translation error.

    Ch 2804 Men Are Not As Fun Compared To Hunting Demons
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    What lobster? We all know it's Bizarro Mr. Crabs

    Ch 2797 The Mastermind Behind The Scene—The Black Claw Emperor
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    As predicted

    Ch 2792 Why Be a Beast?
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    I liked the chapter, but it makes no sense that Mo Fan and the rest arent helping. Unless they are eiather secretly getting healing scroll for Commander Hua or planning a swift assassination to avoid the stronger Ocean Demons to be alerted.

    Ch 2791 Ghostly Energy Sword
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to FF_Ace

    Thanks! I was trying to remember her name

    Ch 2779 Summoning The Lycoris Sorceress Queen
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to Frank_Speed

    viscera hunters

    Ch 2762 Squid King
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to DaoistnnKQMq

    and with too much fluff

    Ch 2758 The Three Greatest Totem Beasts Reunited
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    According to the army commander to teach forbidden level you need to go against nature, and this should be done by absorbing a large natural energy source like the fire pistil. Their lake like Underground Spring might serve that purpose. Also, what the commander said isn't common knowledge and they might not know about it.

    Ch 2753 The Fifth Element
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to Escian

    I think the place will be comparable to the sacred cultivation area at the Pantheon grounds.

    Ch 2739 Hit the Jackpot
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to Ramavan

    I think it's the culture that came from the egg they got at the dragon mountain. It's not a contract, just domesticated.

    Ch 2704 Grill the Shark
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    How did the shark like creature end up being a kraken, which would make it a squid like creature?

    Ch 2704 Grill the Shark
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to aridavid5

    *the vulture

    Mo Fan and Zhao Manyan discussed among themselves, instead. They decided to summon Little Blae Belle, Moon Moth Phoenix, Royal Pattern Wolf, Wind Flame Lightning Vulture, and Little Green Kraken to handle Chief Shark's huge carcass.
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    I'm only able to recognize Little Flame Belle and Moon Moth Phoenix. I imagine the Royal Pattern Wolf is Mo Fan's summon, and the culture is the one they got when escaping the dragon mountain way back when. I have no idea who the Green Kraken is.

    Mo Fan and Zhao Manyan discussed among themselves, instead. They decided to summon Little Blae Belle, Moon Moth Phoenix, Royal Pattern Wolf, Wind Flame Lightning Vulture, and Little Green Kraken to handle Chief Shark's huge carcass.
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    Death by Snu Snu

    Ch 2697 Ruthless Slaughter
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Commented

    Let me walk on the surface of this magic lake that I don't understand, but I believe it's part of the body of a demon. Mo Fan deserves a Darwin Awards Honorary Mention.

    Ch 2696 Sink into the Lake
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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  • aridavid5
    aridavid51yr
    Replied to Sherlock07

    Please look at the replies to iscrewashe

    Ch 2691 The Five Elders Perish in Fire
    altalt
    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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