Review Detail of aridavid5 in Another World’s Versatile Crafting Master

The plot is very good and the storyline is great. However, the author repeats itself so much that half or more of the text could be removed without the story being affected in the slightest. Sometimes a paragraph is the same as the one before the previous but I'm a different order so that it relates to what was being said in the previous paragraph. Even worse sometimes a chapter is a retelling of the previous chapter with different words, and some added details. This is the reason for removing 3 stars from writing quality. I was tempted to remove 4 stars, but the actual storyline redeems it a bit.