harry wants to be powerful and make a name for him self so he should of took the offer learning from a brilliant wizard like voldermort would help him more than if he studied under dumbledore as he tends to horde and not let people learn but voldermort wants people to learn this seems to be going down hill. the mind magic is ment to help with recalling memories and with emotions. look at Snape he is a master as he has to control himself around death eaters and voldermort is insane not because of mind magic because he ripped his soul. remember knowledge is power. voldermort could help him give him books to read and he'd still discover on his own and come on the dark arts can do amazing things don't be a baby 😉 😜 if u want to deal with dark curses u must know what they are Ie curse breaker

hi, I've been reading your story so far. I have a very slight problem with it. you say wizards bring magic into there body's so azkaban prisoners can't cast magic but what about the guards the wizard ones and azkaban would have alot of magic there because a magical structure has been put there plus dementors there magical too so dosnt make sense. if a wizard goes to another part world he will be stuck as no magic

hi its a good book and please don't leave it up to the readers you decide how the story is going as I have read alot of fan fiction and it goes way down hill when the author let's people decide how it goes so please keep it as your book thanks

hi just a little feed back you said harry wand is ivory well ivory is like an off white colour so his wand will not be black

I don't belive draco is a good slytherin he is only there because of his family. as he is not cunning or ambitious he flaunts his family's wealth and the one line he is known for. wait till my father hears about this. so he dosnt want to be a great wizard he isn't sly he is more of gryffindor he rushes in causes trouble. only reason he dosnt get into much trouble is because Snape not because he is cunning not to get caught. this I don't belive will be good story he will be running after the boy who lived so what is different about this book than Canon?

this is the first ttimeu mentioned harry having glasses so why give him glasses now even during dules where he gets thrown about u say nothing about his glasses so I assumed he didn't have any as its a weakness that he shouldn't have

Hi maybe i read it wrong but didnt Hope Potter fall on Alaric and rip her bag open so hope must of had diary

hi has this story been dropped it's an amazing story please put more up

hi are you going to upload more or has this been dropped

hey author this is a real good well written book could you please update or put a sequel out I'd give you 10 stars 100 stars please please more really good story character development awesome

is this been dropped

hi is this fan fic going to be updated at all? really good but seems like you haven't made up your mind of dark lord or light some parts really dark other parts like he is light. I do like the struggle of him not liking the dark arts at the start and then want to practice all aspects of magic because of his family hope you update soon

hey please upload more really good story

what is the rewriting going to be called are you starting from scratch or just some chapters keep up good work really good story

hi just wondering if this is dropped really good story are you uploading anymore please do

have you dropped this ?

hope you get back into it as was getting good I'd say read jk original books and you'll want to write better and Kik joker1814 could discuss books got few ideas anyone ad

I like the Harry potter universe but not keen on books n movies hp never trained never used what he had parsaltounge magic got few ideas mate but can't put it in books someone talent as you author of this book could use

good writer ignore the haters mate they hate because they can't do

hi are you still posting this story as it's good I would like to get more chapters tho more frequently thanks