This novel just doesn’t make sense there is way to many gaps

Please don’t be a harem. Author please let’s us know if it is on the book description bc not everyone likes them

I don’t like how short these chapters were they were basically a page and a half. Pls author you been great don’t end tpu greatness now

It’s ’ actually good. I enjoyed it and would be sad if it didn’t continue . I’ loving the oac so far and wAnt to know More about what will happen with the Mc, his mom and dad.

Do better

Th progress of this novel is too slow and it been like a month and a half and wee still on the same game. As the author you should know better because this even this chapter was way to short and added nothing to the story

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I liked the story its fun and sh9ws kingdom buildingfun I liked the story its fun and sh9ws kingdom buildingfun I liked the story its fun and sh9ws kingdom buildingfun I liked the story its fun and sh9ws kingdom buildingfun

another

welcome back we have missed you

story is decent but midway threw you stop talking ahout the kids and its unclear what happens with her boss, its it a flashback or is it currently happening?

why is this written in third person. pls stop that.

finally

sorry for the grammar im walking while i type this

the other couples are so much more interesting than dave and nancy smar goes with tyler and nala. the other couple you set the bar high we love their personalites and flirtung with dave its just dry and with tyler is weird bc nala is like a jen replacement

i dont like the couple

everything ok?

sooooo... new chapters