Like how this is a literal rip off from that one comic series thats i think also on this app

Cliche character tropes, and a few plot holes here and there. Honestly idk why but the characters feel so weirdly written and oblivious at times. 3/5 at best

I gotta say I really liked this one, the story has its twists and turns and it plays out very well, but the update consistency is very bad and you often forget where the story even left off when a new chapter comes out.

Concept is interesting, but the writing is inconsistent to the point I can’t tolerate it. Gender pronouns are wrong more often than right. Early on MC levels bloodline stat to 20 then the next time he looks at his stats, bloodline is back to 10 and he levels it up again. If you can’t remember what you wrote 4 chapters ago, maybe don’t try to be an author.

this did make me laugh.

good chapter! but still is it just me or are they getting shorter?

just me or are the chapters getting shorter?

cliffhanger again ugh

as if he could kill the queen.

lots of mistakes lately

lies

discord 👀

overall I like everything about this, the only thing I have a problem whit is that the world-building is a bit slow. also, I have spotted a lot of grammar mistakes even in later chapters, they can be ignored but they usually set me back while reading.

the pacing tho