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The beginning of the fantic was good. However, as the story progress, it's quality gradually fell. Around chapter 200+, reading the story became boring. It might be because the author releases chapters too fast. Nevertheless, good work author. Having written a story with more than 200 chapters is something worthy of praise.
Don't mind me, I just want to comment something I've read in the Type-moon wiki just recently. Apparently, Japanese (or Eastern?) Heroic Spirit can't be summoned in Fuyuki grail war, and only Western Heroic Spirit are allowed, due to some kind of restriction when the system was made. Sasaki's(Assassin) summoning was an anomaly in the system due to Caster being his summoner. Again, I'm not sure if this information is accurate. I've only read this from the wiki. Thanks for the chapter, author.
This fanfic is great! 10/10 would recommend. Writing quality: 4.5/5 (Because, as the author mentioned, english is not perfect. There's some mistakes here and there. Nothing mayor that will affect reading.) Update stability: 5 (From what I've seen, there's at least one chapter a week.) Story development: 5 (Nothing to say(write), read is yourself. It's good.) Character design: 5 (I like the Mc's character. Also, the other characters follow their canon personality, other than being somewhat more 'realistic'.) World background: 5 (Personally, I found no glaring plot holes. I don't have much knowledge about Marvel.)
I'll be honest, I didn't understand some things about the story. It feels like a lot context is left out, and it's not descriptive enough. It's not a bad fanfic compared to the majority in this site, but reading it gives me a bit of a headache trying to understand what going on. P. S. : I'm not really good at giving reviews, and this is only my opinion about this story.
This is a pretty entertaining pokémon fanfic. The relationships are done alright. There is no big harem, mc's only has two girlfriends, both are childhood friends. Writing quality is good, and has no glaring plot hole as far as I've read. Also, about the other reincarnator some people are complaining about, that guy don't really have much impact on the story. He live in different region from the mc so it is unlikely he will have a significant role in the story. At least I think so... Overall, I can recommend reading this fanfic.
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