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An all-around jack-ass, the most masculine specimen, testosterone levels are off the charts. Women wet their panties the moment they lay their eyes on me.
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I feel as though the crying had a bit more behind it than just failing to hit the target. I think that was just the straw that broke the camel's back, the bulk of the emotional baggage was probably due to him being torn away from his cozy life and placed into a world full of child soldiers, with him being one, all without consent.
I've been reading this little gem over on FFN and I'm glad to say that it's been a great read. It's an incredibly realistic portrayal of how transmigration scenarios should progress. I personally love the depth of Takuma's character and his development. From the desperation he had in the academy, to the determination and resolve that he has now. (I'm currently at chapter 60) I can easily tell that this is going to be a long novel, something that I can certainly appreciate, hence the (relatively) slow power growth. Not that I'm against it. There's far too many "kage level at age 13" fics going around. I digress, this approach to power development makes normally irrelevant achievements feel like the second coming of Christ, that C-rank jutsu had more narrative weight than most fics give to Black Zetsu or Obito. Lastly, I gotta talk about this beautiful world that you've built up. What you're doing with the Genin Corps really speaks for itself, amazing stuff. All in all, don't listen to the others who complain that its too slow or that Takuma is pathetic. (which, yeah, that's the point, especially in the academy arc) Their dopamine receptors are ash from the millions of "Sage Of The Six Paths level power by chapter 10" fics they've consumed.
Fucking aids.
Yeah, it's a double edged sword, sadly.
Conversely, that selfsame attitude is why we're top dog right now.
Where's the double standard?
Bro, you don't even know what he wants yet.
In my defense, I was skim-reading the shot out of this one to see if it had potential or not, I did not know she was 12, despite that being in the paragraph above.
Bro, what kinda mental gymnastics world champion are you?
He's not supposed to practice, needs to buy a new weapon and get registered at the association.
I think it's less probability and luck and more outside preternatural forces influencing his life.
Yeah, but if he regained his sight, he could see AND sense mana I think, what he has currently is a W, but he could've had a W².
Pray tell, oh wise commenter, where did you get that from?
Wasn't it implied that to perceive Mythic energy —Mana— you need to be able to see? At the very least, he can go dungeon diving with his parents.
Tell me you were skim-reading without telling me you were skim-reading:
You've never played civ, have you?
you're bitchless
Going in guns blazing to Avengers HQ while the Avengers are there is pretty dumb, my man. Granted I haven't read this in who knows how long and I've forgotten everything, but I think that's what my thought process was.
Translation: daddy's girl went right under his nose and screwed her boyfriend, whom he doesn't approve of, now she's using our pal here as a cover-up to her loss of maidenhood. This is what makes the most sense to me, her just randomly accusing people and killing for no reason doesn't make much sense.
Ope. And I just started reading today. Welp, can't wait for your new fic.