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Saltybolty

Saltybolty

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2019-07-17 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty2yr
    Posted

    This novels is average at best, grammar is horrendous with stiff and boring dialogue. what annoys me is that the author removes reviews below 4 stars...

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    Be happy with sports
    Sports · goodlion
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty2yr
    Replied to DynastyLovely

    May I ask for the Raw Name?

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    Evolving into a Great Dragon From a Koi Fish
    Fantasy · Eternal Dream
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty2yr
    Replied to MasterEragon

    Not likely, if he could actually 'Predict' events he would most likely be put under watch or straight up dissected

    Subconsciously, Zhang Yang did not want anyone to know about his predicament. Even if he were to tell people about it, no one would believe him. Secondly, if his secret was exposed, he could be captured and subjected to experiments. In the end, he decided that he’d rather bring his secret to the grave.
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    MMORPG: Rebirth of the Legendary Guardian
    Games · Flying Alone
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Posted

    Honestly this book lacks soul, or in simpler terms it's very mechanical and doesn't flow well, the conversations are extremely stiff and boring. character personality are pretty bad and sloppy. I was excited to read a new romance book where the mc is male but sadly this isnt really a novel it feels more like a script there no emotion and the character themselves He Fang and the mc are extremely boring and have basically no personality

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    Wife Please Be Obedient
    Urban · Flowers Haven't Bloomed
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Posted

    Honestly, I was looking forward to reading this novel and it greatly disappointed me. You're thrown right into the book without any introduction or build up. Theres practice no logic. like how did he end up meeting the Duke? how does he buy weapons and arms from earth? (no description or story of the actual earth) MC is really concieted and quite stupid. if you want something that has actual sense and world devotion read empress gigglo (Mc has the power to transfer between world and uses it to improve that worlds civilisation)

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    Starting With a City as a Transmigrator
    Eastern · Sheng Sheng Has a City
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to Over_Lord_9904

    Seriously, there is a lack of necromancy stories and even if they do they are a minor plot armour such as having a skeleton puppet or just soul searching

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    Skeleton's Training Manual
    Urban · Angry laughter
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to Sage_Honos

    Same here, I only recently started reading tech/magic novels can you recommend some?

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    A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
    Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to DefinitelyNot

    Honestly, it's just a little patriotic if the author is good and considers nations history etc... besides the one they were born and raised in, it's good for example World Online although you may say it favours china of course it does but if you look how the author portrays America and England you can see that he tries to balance everything out. but come on would you end up reading a kingdom building novel if the mc is on losing side? and weak? nope you wouldn't so it doesn't really matter. the only thing that puts me off usually is the racism between china and Japan. but I usually find Korean novels even more racist, ones I've read so far have alot of supremacy in it

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    Lord of the Gaming World
    Games · A night of Green smoke
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Posted

    Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.

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    Heaven Destroyer
    Fantasy · Eternal_Demon
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to Noire_Nova

    ... Not gonna lie, you had me in the first half

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    Heaven Destroyer
    Fantasy · Eternal_Demon
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to Jaydan_Bishop

    Wait... is this true? if it is its equally erotic yet horrifying at the same time. maybe after a couple of months you'll turn into a mindless breeding puppet

    She would become so strong that she would break the taboo between them and own Lin Fan!
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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to SuwaiL

    Damn, just remembered why it's so familiar it's from that monster novel where the mc can tame monsters into cards. even has the knowledge trait

    Skills: Parasite Seeds, Vine Lash, Super Intelligence, Explosive Seeds, Mind Split, Telekinesis.
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    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to OmnipotentDad

    Yeah, sorry bout that but if its good around 100 chapters I'll continue reading, I'll also change the review. ans thanks for replying most authors dont. but can I ask one question, does the mc end up dating like 5 or 8 girls at once? cause although I dont mind harem once it gets to that number I usually stop

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    Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
    Eastern · OmnipotentDad
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Posted

    Writing quality is readable at best, it just doesn't flow, the plot is forced and most of the beginning you dont even understand what's happening, the transitions of the story is sup par. also the way the author portrays the mc is... just *a know it all brat* literally he has no depth as a character besides being perverted. The side characters have no background what so ever. they are introduced somewhat haphazardly. Overall my rating is around 2 stars because it's a crap cliche of a novel.

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    Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
    Eastern · OmnipotentDad
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to EtherealStar

    Love that comment 'Slippery being sake'

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    Omega Summoner
    Games · XiaoKongxu
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to Dwarkin

    Depends, we havent found out what happend for him to been crippled like that. and the gaming it would help since his 'legs' in the game are perfectly fine he could learn the motions again which can also be translated back to the real world

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    Omega Summoner
    Games · XiaoKongxu
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Commented

    .... now all that oppressive atmosphere made by the novel is gone all I see is him being crosseyed

    When he had met the Demon Emperor Salem, he felt like he was standing before a person that was impossible to be defeated. He felt like Demon Emperor Salem was the real king while he sat just a kid before him. He was like an incomparable mountain in Vampire King's eyes, but the feelings he got from Ryder were entirely different.
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    Divinity: Against the Godly System
    Games · Demonic_angel
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to The_Good_Devil

    Scholars Technology System, makes good use of this fact. by using the memories and the subconscious they use those to create the realistic textures, smells etc... but the physics and main load is on the computing cloud. its basically uses your brain as a texture pack whilst the core runs on the vr itself

    My next task is simple! First, I'll visit the NexusMods website and download all the goodies that I don't have right now. I have pretty much all the essential and the famous mods, but since the FDVR technology has very high capabilities and uses the brain as the area of operation instead of the computer's CPU, I can operate more mods than usual without worrying about crashing the game.
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    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Posted

    The power balance isnt just right, you have OP mcs and there is just this.. theres no sense of accomplishment it's just given to him. I like the Idea that humans aren't the ones on top of the hierarchy. but it could be more emphasised.

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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Eastern · Panda Reunion
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  • Saltybolty
    Saltybolty3yr
    Replied to Turmoil

    Could be a non human empire, keep in mind it has dragon in its name

    Hudders belched, somewhat drunk. He said, "You should know that our village is under the jurisdiction of the Fire Dragon Kingdom, which is also one of the kingdoms under the Dragon God Empire's command!"
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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Eastern · Panda Reunion
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