honestly, if it's a reincarnated person it would be interesting, I've never seen any novel or fic like that, where the reincarnated MC has a son or daughter who is also reincarnated. because at this moment the MC is already around 800 years old, a human being who lived for around 20 years, died and was reincarnated as his son, for him it will still be like a baby.

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Is it strange to be moved by this simulation of Muzan sacrificing himself because he wanted to die with him? Man... I don't know what to say, it just really got to me. remembered Akame ga kill.

In**** Highschool DxD ;-;

Ok Highschool DxD**

the protagonist travels to another world abandoning his family with the excuse that he wants to explore. then the first place he arrives he agrees to become a teacher... totally ridiculous, if he was something like an adventurer or something... and then he still has the audacity to act like a bored isekai protagonist "ah, why trouble always happen to me".... no, just don't. protagonist looks like a madman with personality disorder.

theoretically, there are only 4 levels of demons. low, medium, high and supreme/ultimate. the 'Maou's is a political title that comes from the pre-Civil War power structure of the demons. Earlier it was about the heiress of such a family: "Lucifer", "Beelzebub", etc. then it became a political office and they also created a council or something, which some demons are said to participate in it. as the head of the "Bael" house if I'm not mistaken. so the maou demons like serafall and the other bald maou, are ultimate/maximum demon levels basically unmatched in the same class (ultimate). and after that a demon becomes a super demon, basically becoming a transcendent. we know of the current maou lucifer is one of those. but this all gets a little strange when we realize that despite being explained more or less like this in the story, there are angels and fallen angels of 5 pairs of wings and above... if it were to be a corresponding level it would be 5 pairs of wings equal to a super demon, but no. then it gets really weird.

who never dreamed of a threesome, right?

this came out through google translate. "man thing" meant that normal (adult content) you're still watching another man, technically.

different mindsets really. I honestly don't mind Yuri being in the MC's Harem, as long as it's clear that it's the MC's harem and not that FM yuri. I actually find it pretty sexy. it's not like she goes out there on the street and does it with anyone, but with the members of the harem, many times who call themselves "sisters" or "family" and who in most of these novels or fanfics, will pass to eternity together. so no, I don't particularly care if there's yuri like that. Comment there your thoughts, I want to know what you think.

hahaha the author fell to the same level as the writers of marvel. there's always this: "oh my god, he was cheated on" then after a while it's revealed that no, he wasn't cheated on. It was all illusion ;v

my friend, hemorrhage doesn't just mean bleeding. I can make dozens of cuts in the skin that will go nowhere. You said it yourself before, bleeding can be venous or arterial, and do you happen to think humans have Wolverine powers or something? Do you think the veins will recover and fuse on their own? bleeding is life threatening yes, the only thing that keeps someone from dying of bleeding is stopping the blood to buy enough time for surgery. Do I still need to say that in a battle this is guaranteed death? Do you by any chance have common sense?

even funnier you say "hemorrhage is just bleeding, if you treat it you won't die" ok, ok. so, like, did you see any doctors in this dungeon? a person with hemorrhage can't even walk straight, the organs start to fail! nor talk about bleeding in the brain, the person passes out instantly. so technically, it was supposed to be certain death in the middle of a battle. not to mention that he spent hours assimilating the "advanced healing factor" when he was absurdly injured. mc is still human... he only has infinite mana, nothing to increase his base, which was still human.

the protagonist is heading in a direction very similar to Add. like, he controls nanites and he's also a psychic. it would be really cool if you went in that direction, but I don't know if you know the character Add from the game "Elsword". anything searches for demonstrations of his skills on you tube, he has a lot of skills that mix psychic powers and technology, in all his classes.

I saw that I wrote the formula wrong, but yes, the way you put it now is totally right. just that thing, right, stacking it 30 times is unreal. are tens of megatons

don't get me wrong either. I really liked your fanfic, just pointing out some mistakes. On the webnovel alone I've read more than 3 thousand novels and fanfics, but few I cared enough to comment. I think your fanfic is very mature and has potential, its protagonist is not a young Chinese master, nor an angry teenager, which already makes it better than 90% of the others out there.

you don't fool me, I clearly remember it wasn't like this before, you edited it. another thing, if you're going to do something different then explain it, it's a fanfic, but the things that are common sense if you want to change you need to explain it clearly. Boosted gear works by doubling the user's ability, and stacks. so don't say something like armor boosted tyrant 2.0 or anything like that because it's just a fake compared to the original, the normal that has in the real work.

you made a big mistake, I suggest reading my comment in the previous chapter. that's not how boosted gear works. 100x10= 1000???? WRONG!!! Boosted gear works by doubling the power. would then be 100^10, which also, again, as in my previous comment, is over 1 BILLION!!! so either you rewrite it again or you explain later that your version of boosted gear is just a third-line fake.

exciting and all, but I'd like to touch on 2 points here. First, this spitting blood... when someone spits blood there are 2 reasons, either the teeth were broken/pulled out or the person suffers from hemorrhage. bro, hemorrhage is certain death, the organs start to fail and the person dies in a few minutes at most without medical attention, the protagonist has no healing factor so he should have died. please get that Chinese spirit out of you and erase that paragraph. SECOND, does anyone here understand the absurdity of bust 30 times? who's to say 100 times... bro, let's suppose, protagonist has 1 strength stat point... do you know how much that is doubling 30 times??? is "little" more than 1 BILLION!!!!!! doing a simple math, the average strength of an adult male is around 40 kilos, multiply that by 1 billion and you have a protagonist stronger than the Superman of the bronze age. so please pay attention to the numbers, that was ridiculous, don't even comment on doubling 100 times, the calculator can't even calculate that number.

1980s* as a vampire. because real age is 2000 something