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I missed the process, because I tried to get everything out as fast as I could; I'll make the correction... thanks for the recommendation.
was a guy who has been battered and beaten for years, in one way or another he hates the kind of injustice established but it's not a vigilante style, it's just revenge where he feels it should be exercised.
Yes, my English skills are still improving, I think you are right and it is shorter, I wanted to keep a certain poetic sense.
Some projects, like World Evolution or Death, Overlord saga and some horror stories I have, were done in first and second person because it was necessary to keep the risk and the immersion, because those kinds of stories become predictable when everything is in third person past tense.
Within the logic of this story, the existence of magic potions is limited, the only ones who know how to make them were the elves, while they live with a frank contempt for the other races, which makes the knowledge about the manufacture of potions or the material to prepare them is very distant.