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Just_Sayin22hCommentedCh 28 [28] Predator Killer Armor- Just_Sayin22hReplied to Deus_Da_LeituraCh 27 Author Note: Read.
- Just_Sayin21dCommented
really liked aizawa's reaction. also class B will switch the story up a bit, although I still hope to see class A. Some other bloke already mentioned that most of class B is a bit forgettable though, so maybe stick to just a couple characters in class B? i dunno. great story.
Ch 30 Results - Just_Sayin30dCommented
Nice! adds to the fear factor of the thing/impostor concept well too. since the only thing scarier than knowing it's there and not being able to see it, is being able to see it in facade or true form.
(A/N: I decided to add the new impostor power that Innersloth announced a week ago, since it came in handy in a recent chapter I wrote where Suzaku goes on a killing spree. It's called vanish, and you can go check its details out on the auxiliary chapter, but in summary it makes him invisible for a few seconds. - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
mc's realistic progress with his cheat that rewards effort and doesn't just give him a sharingan for eating noodles in some inane system quest is why im here.
[AN: I got a bunch of comments that I want to mention here, as multiple people upset that Yuta are weaker than Hikari and Itachi. First of all - I don't know how you even came to this conclusion. It is stated that Yuta decided to not go all-out on the exam as it will rise many questions of how he managed to grow so much stronger 'overnight'. He decide to not use his strongest cards - fuinjutsu and genjutsu, and only use weakened version of elemental ninjutsu, as that will be enough to get the promotion. He already grown his chakra level to the level of an average Jonin, considering the time he spend for it, it can be said that it's a great achievement and most shinobi don't even get to that level in their entire life. If you still think that Yuta is too weak, then I have nothing to say to you, other than that there is a lot of novels of wish-fulfilment genre where MC is strong from the start, but I'm trying here to progress the story in the most 'realistic' way I envision for it. ] - Just_Sayin1mthCommentedCh 172 [172] Wrecking Chaos and Rescuing My Goddess
- Just_Sayin1mthCommented
hydra would make good elixir ingredients
But now, Takumi has access to a Hydra on demand. A Hydra whose poison even Devil's fear. And whose regeneration is strong enough to regrow heads. Do you hear? That's the rumble of Alchemic Triumph. - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
well he should go rogue for training at some point but he can always return to konoha in a space/time way if he wanted to.
After that Yuta said goodbye to his teammates and went home. It's evening and while Yuta was walking through the busy streets of Konoha and observes the people on the streets he thought, 'I'm getting used to this place, is it fine though? Or should I try to stay less attached to Konoha instead? I don't really have an answer to it right now...' - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
whilst losing an arm would be a decent (if forced and overused) challenge to overcome, this was a stupid forced way to go about it. This story would've been far better without the attempt to copy Gildarts in literally every way possible. quirk was OP in a boring brute force way too. It was just OFA but written worse and mc didn't innovate or struggle with it at all. The original body owner is a stupid plot point aswell regardless of how you justify it in the future. Yes its great that the mc has a decent challenge to overcome but this wasn't an interesting way to go about it.
"Well, the only thing I can advise is to cut off his right arm. He'll use prosthetics instead." The doctor said. - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
make it a mutation quirk. problem solved.
Kazuki glanced at Aizawa. 'Can he erase my quirk as well?' Kazuki had that thought for a while. 'The system gave me this quirk, but still doesn't the system have some kind of protective layer?' - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
would've been better if you had just copy pasted the concept not the literal IP and yapped about fairy tail ngl.
"Kekeke." Kazuki had an excited smile on his face. 'Crush, a powerful magic from Fairy Tail, and now it's my quirk!' - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
blud they in the mafia
My mother Akane Uchiku, and my father Furui Uchiku. The two of them are ordinary civilians. My father works at a construction company, while my mother is a housewife. - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
pretty accurate interpretation of his character. he was still a good man. just ambitious and overconfident in what he thought he knew.
"Victory! Everyone!" Diavel raised his hand high. Although he couldn't obtain the rare item for the final blow, seeing a powerhouse like Arthur get it, there was nothing more to say. - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
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- Just_Sayin1mthCommented
this would have been a legitimately interesting problem for mc to overcome. freebies make the mc boring.
As I shouted that in frustration, something hit my head. I rub my head and look at two things on the ground. I blink a little when I see a wooden container and what looks like a baby bottle. I pick up the paper sitting next to the baby bottle and read it. - Just_Sayin1mthCommented
weird power. no relevance to plot.
I take the paper and rip it apart. A second later, a rush of knowledge got inside my brain. The gift the Stranger gave to me was something I knew and something very useful. What the Stranger gives me is Minecraft Dimension.