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Hello Author,The story is really great but can you please explain how did his first died and was raped or something and can she be resurrected with some ultra op methods. Please clarify this I know you are new to this but there are some things you didn't explain correctly so I am losing my excitement to read.
Author browhen do you plan to reunite him with his family ?please make It fast or atleast tell me on how many chapters will it take to reunite them I am dying to know I will wait until chapters stack up then read.By the way the novel is great keep it up but can you make MC a little emotional or atleast romantic I feel like he is all about transactions during seggs.
see author bro I don't have any personal grudge against you or anything but I honestly think that this novel could have been way better.And you are saying noNTR but MC has already been NTRed when his fiance was stolen and he couldn't do anything and the women he fell in love become his stepsister and she got engaged to another man isn't that considered NTR and his mother was also taken by another man and If read correctly Austin and MC are both young so that is also considered NTR in my book.And another ridiculous thing is how can a mother even if she goes to another man and fucks with him Even if that happens how can she even not care about her child and she doesn't even contact him when it's already very late .Bro I recommend that you make changes in story so that it makes impact on rankings.
The story could have been a lot better if the author had invested some more time in thinking I mean How could the MC mother abandon him for another man when she is clearly stronger (don't stronger people have strong minds) and Irina's father just said to her you are making a mistake and in confrontation between father and daughter chapter he is thinking that his daughter has been manipulated fucking ridiculous.Even if author is explaining his reasons for the cause still it is ridiculous I mean His grandfather is a Martial Emperor even he couldn't find anything strange why doesn't he just commit suicide if he can't even think clearly. Just the whole fucking world is influenced by a bunch of villains and heroes with systems and there is our mc with neutral system which negates villains and heroes halo and to top it off he suffers more than his previous life and he is going to suffer even more later.I mean he can't be even be sure if his girls will cuckold him for hero and villains halo he is very weak.
hello author I have request can you make Yvan very ruthless after the plan to kill him fails like make him realize that being weak and awkward doesn't work and can you make him slap his sister who is a real bitch like how can blame him alone when his mother was killed in front of him. If his mother was killed in front of her would she not have behaved like that make her realize that. And the MC should also berate his teacher and arthur. There are numerous logical mistakes and MC only revolves on his self pity. I would be very grateful if you could do that I think this would add spice and thriller to your story but if you could not make that happen this fast I think your novel will not become very popular because nowadays people really hate indecisive mc (not weak).
Honestly This Novel could have been hit If the author had used some more of his brain and read some novels.I mean the wives don't even care about him they could have atleast tried to change him from drinking alcohol but No they just left him all alone and his parents are the same doesn't make sense when the parents are so doting then they could have atleast tried to change him instead of kicking him out.I seriously think I could have wrote a better novel than this shit.