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EIo_Police4dCommentedso, ppl can only be invited into the game, but an antagonistic group can freely dispatch its members into it? cmon...
It turned out that the Brotherhood of Night Blades was a branch of the Night Blades. These individuals had been secretly dispatched domestically and had infiltrated the game the Other World.- EIo_Police6dCommented
the story was so good until now...
"Maybe I'm just overthinking it." - EIo_Police17dCommented
its legit impossible for writers to not kill parents at the beginning.
"Mother, father…" he sobbed, squeezing their cold hands. "I'm sorry...I'm so sorry..." - EIo_Police1mthCommented
7 ist not even close to many. a totally normal number.
He wasn't sure if 176 times was a lot or a little, but 7 people were certainly not few. - EIo_Police1mthCommented
he really thinks loyalty comes from abuse and toxic behaviour...
"Controlling a deputy star isn't omnipotent... I still have to figure out ways to increase my subordinates' loyalty. Life isn't easy for me." Sterl reflected internally, also settling on a principle. - EIo_Police1mthCommented
what kind of edgelord power trip is he on now?
"From now on, you should call me master." Sterl said, while fondling the body of the female player, seemingly unable to let go. - EIo_Police2mthCommented
author is 100% white
[ Ahem* Ahem* it seems you don't know your position, listen here you nigga, I will give you 2 days worth of time... - EIo_Police3mthReplied to Dao_Of_Sauce
author is trying to be incredibly edgy and "cool" for no reason. it makes it just more cringe
Zane had honestly forgotten that these two pesky flies were still surrounding him, or he would have if the constant reminder that they were the reason he was having such difficulties getting to his destination was in the back of his mind. - EIo_Police3mthPosted
While I really enjoy the world setting, I have major problems with the MC. To me, he is the worst MC I have ever witnessed. He is a proper narcissist, with a terrible attitude. He is a highly flawed character, but apparently, everyone is just too stupid to see it or to actually bother. He treats everyone except for Susan like shit and gets an attitude when he's being called out for it. He just has too many plot armours to get a proper reality check. There are honestly too many character flaws to list...
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instead of giving them troop Plans earlier on he waits for no reason. the can pay later but waiting longer just deminishes their chance of survival. and he legit didn't give them anything for free.
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????????
At first, I thought I had misheard. 18 points instead of 180 points? - EIo_Police3mthCommented
get ur names right, who tf are Vale and Lisa.
On the other hand, Harper and Lisa helped Shane by carrying and placing the pikes around the church. They also used the metal pipes and the broken pikes to reinforce the fence, adding more strength and durability. - EIo_Police7mthCommented
who tf is land?
This book has been deleted. - EIo_Police8mthCommentedCh 28 Chapter 28: Moonshadow City pt-2
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nothing should've changed since the mc never interfered with anything related to the party....
'Oh, now I remember, that one guy from school, what was his name again, Felix Wayne. Yeah, somebody got killed during the party. Caroline was taken by the guys that tried to rob the place, and she was never seen again, right after that, Gloria never smiled the same way as she used to. But this time, she came back home safe and sound. What an immense change in things,' he thought. - EIo_Police9mthCommented
nothing made sense in this paragraph...
They all nodded and went to his side as he walked out. Caroline walked downstairs with her hands raised. - EIo_Police10mthCommented
he told every former slave where the city is, and now he is moving the city lol
The speed of the city travelling within each second was incomparably fast that if any of the citizens blinked, they would discover new seas and land. - EIo_Police10mthCommented
what???
"What is this? Probably like a bra?" Gab questioned, referring to the unusual undergarment. He realized that men were expected to wear bras in this world, unlike his previous reality. - EIo_Police11mthCommentedCh 1 Wokeup as a pretty Boy
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bro, she is 12??????
She was wearing a maid out , even though it looked like a normal maid outfit but her short skirt and white knee length socks with black heels made her look really sexy .