Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to how this will develop.

Now THIS is the attitude that Snape that should have had.

What a waste. Also, it is unlikely people will bother with other novels if you have a history of abandoning them.

Not sure what some of the others are talking about in terms of the translation quality, it seems fine to me. In terms of the character being called out on only using his haki for everything, it is true for the moment but Kaido's fruit is on the table he just does not have the ability to use it yet. In terms of people thinking he is too OP, frankly I think that is good, as he is OP compared to the random fairy tail members, but in the early parts of FT they are hardly the ceiling of power, plus it means we wont need some silly friendship shouting powerups which are always cringe. The updates flow fairly often too which is nice.

This was a very good idea, and defo a first among hp ff's

Well I did not think I would ever be seeing an update to this novel. Pleasantly surprised.

At the current point he is indeed, but the strength leans more towards the more esoteric sides of the force rather than raw power, so their is a lot more trickery than direct confrontation

Ergh, not ai's. Those are never done well.

Ah that is fair. It is well written enough I assumed you were well versed in writing. As a reader we always want more, that is the greed of the readers.

This is blasting through at a crazy speed. At this rate the content will run out before we hit tripple digets.

I like this, I have been looking for years for a TLM FF to no avail so having this is cool. I seen not everyone is happy about the system change, but I for one think it is a good change. In the original novel getting xp for the levels was only really possible due to the players, and was a slog at that. If there are two of them going after the xp it would slow everything down, plus as a non-mechanic he doesnt have much to sell. The MC attitude seems a bit frivolous. I have always been of the mind that there is a fine line between funny and annoying, we haven't reached the danger zone but is something to pay attention too. If the MC ends up being a bit of a sidekick to Han Xiao, I think that is ok as that means you can focus on interpersonal relationships between the characters which is something the original novel did not do except with a select few. All in all I look forward to seeing how this goes.

What world is this?

Have a nice holiday. Take it easy.

I like your take, especially on Dumbledore.

I think that sounds better. That said forgiveness is something that is earned and takes time. Creatively this is something that you do not need to rush as you can cookie crumb the steps and you have years in story to spread it out as an overarching storyline rather than a box to check.

Well this just took a creative nose dive. My guy spent 60 chapters setting up how bad they were to the kid, about how damaged he is inside and out and traumatized to oh we were tricked all is forgiven now.

So he is not even the winter soldier, so the title is a full on lie, also the writing is pretty terrible, it feels like chunks of the story haven't been posted and it jumps about.

This one held a some promise before it was abandoned, in its current state it is not worth reading as its far too short, but if it was picked up again it could become something.

A great start, with such a unique idea. The ball is in your court now folks, I for one have great hopes for this, plus the no harem tag is always good to see.

hyped for the plot to start